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Really enjoyed the read. It's similar to my book"Rheurym"
Tokoh utamanya sungguh menarik tidak naif tapi buat sedikit dramalah thor
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Writing: 3 stars because of the missing options.Character: 3 stars becouse how boring his character is.Story Dev.: 2 Mc Potential would be Top but it feels like average side character in other NovelsUpdate Stability:3 stars because I dont know.Word B. : Nothing special thats wh 3 stars
Really liking it so far keep up the good work Author-nim.Also hope you have good day and I would love to see more books from you :).........
I love the world background, the writing and how the things are going, this story is so exciting, it makes you want to read more and more, thank you author <3, everytime I read a new chapter it brightens my day
Other than a few spelling and grammar errors (namely capitalization and sentence flow), this book seems great for my collection! Awesome premise, but im afraid the writing quality is only about ~3.5 stars. So overall 4.6, pretty good!Dont feel discouraged, your writing skills are bound to get better with time!
I stumbled across this novel randomly and I was initially expecting a run of the mill ‘villain with a system’ perspective, but I am glad it subverted my expectations. The story is quite intelligent in that it introduces you to a ‘villain’ that is more of an anti-hero, in my opinion, who has advantages because of his rebirth and the system, but still has to use his wit and experience to figure things out as they come…he doesn’t just get everything handed to him on a platter.I also like that the plot is multi-layered and we find things out just as the protagonist does so in a sense we are living the experience along with him. I will say though that at the start, the plot was slow getting off the ground but it’s understandable since the author is learning the ropes as well.Overall, it’s a great book so far, and I can’t wait to find out more as things develop further!
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A wholesome adventure of siblings witha nicely put tension and cliffhanger. The pace of this story is all right, reader could easily follow. The grammar is nicely sharpened. Keep on going Author, keep on writing. Story must be told.