AncientInk
Writer is seem u don’t have anything more to write than songs, the chapters you be posting are all songs which is annoying we are not paying to read songs, i done wasting money on songs, story started good but you have spoil it will the spoils , how can chapter of 17 pages and 15 are songs?
Try this again. This book is too over the place. I just couldn’t read anymore. It’s jumping from one scene to another and then just adding in a lot of unnecessary stuff as well as making it very fast pace. On top of that the grammar is just horrible.
the book is great
...... nice nice
Wowww i love this new story , exciting for me, ............
new book soon please
Nice one , you can give it a shot
At the start of this novel, I held high expectations. The initial ten chapters were engaging and intriguing for me. I had been searching for a story with a broader protagonist, but as the narrative progressed, I found myself becoming increasingly frustrated for reasons I couldn't pinpoint. I believe there are several contributing factors.
Firstly, the world felt flat and two-dimensional. While I understand that some novels take this approach, the MC's challenges lacked depth, reducing to mere revelations and overcoming obstacles without significant adversity. Secondly, the MC's portrayal was inconsistent with their claimed低调 (low-key) nature. Despite their claims, their actions spoke louder, often revealing a more张扬 character than they let on.
Thirdly, the villains grated on my nerves. They came across as one-dimensional, akin to those clichéd Disney antagonists who revel in causing mischief. Their motivations seemed shallow, making it difficult to take them seriously as true villains.
Lastly, the MC's attempts at wisdom struck me as pretentious rather than wise. Whenever the narrative tried to portray them as admirable, it felt overly full of pride, akin to sipping stagnant water. If you enjoy the story, by all means, read on, but be prepared to suspend disbelief and overlook these aspects.
Aint it still being written?
Kinda late to say this but the the mc's friend was always a girl she just pretended to be a guy in the game
Not in wiki ... Checked the discord too... No illustrations ?
Came back just to comment. So now we will never see Aiden win an oscar or a Grammy
