I really like the story but from Chapter 18 it totally got fumbled up. I mean the timeskip is okish but it too much it remove the essence of the starting which I basically like the most. Their struggle how he overcome it with his pure intelligence. Overall the story before that is too good but from that chapter it goes downhill.I got totally confused what happening and when happening ,where happening. Each chapter like new time new place suddenly.
i am the author and I don't know what is lacking,if i am wrong guide me please, thanks
Dear Author,So far I'm liking what I'm reading. I'm loving the flow of the story specially the details haha. Though what I can suggest is that try to put in more content, specially the first few chapters— but that's just for me though I guess I'm just kinda used to reading books that have 2k or more words per chapter.Anyways so far I like what I'm reading and I hope the author continues on with writing not only to finish this wonderful work but also to work on more books as well in the future.(u2060｡u2060･u2060ωu2060･u2060｡u2060)u2060ﾉu2060♡Much Love,Loki
Read all the available chapters and wanted more! The premise of going against the norm is strong in this one, especially since it’s not only against society but also affects the family.But our MC understands the trade-off and is willing to make the sacrifice!Tears won’t get you far enough, but grit will, and Irene was sure as hell determined!The writing is superb and the little rascal had me thinking about her next plans! Even felt like scolding her brother for good measure. Felt relatable enough when I realized lol! ?Please upload more chapters! ?
a superb hooking read. Although there is a very annoying character I just can't stand and it's the villainess. she's infuriating
i dont like the way it ended but the story is good .
Honestly, one of the quicker openings, but it slows down in a very good way. The development is good, the character growth is explained well, the descriptions of characters and the world are done well.
Well, what can I say except AMAZING! The grammars are splendid. The development is steady even though I'm still at the earlier chapters. The world background is also remarkable. Anyway, I highly recommend this book and author, don't you dare stop this book, hehe.
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Was waiting for a psychological story and it's pretty good,currently waiting for next chapter overall I see a good character development and ya only time will say now
Its's a compilation of many short stories. They'll be released in one or two chapters every week.
Hello! Author here!I am thrilled to write this story, I'm just at the beginning but I already love the characters, and I'm sure you will love it too! Please it give it a try and support a new wannabe author!