An interesting take and start. I will admit the story takes some unexpected turns. Now , at the beginning, the words seem to need some fixing in their placement. It was difficult to understand who was speaking in that instant, but other than those mistakes, it's worth checking out.
Pretty much a xianxia with a Mc that is considered trash and untalented but gets a fortuitous opportunity and becomes stronger than those more talented than him. As there are not too many chapters so I will refrain from making too many points but it has plenty of usual problems. For Example, The background is loosely explained with little to no interactions and the ones that do happen are bland or forced with the usual looking down on Mc. Characters are not fleshed out and author seems to be trying to focus on Mc alone with other characters only being there for convenience.
i enjoy the flow of the novel and the route the storyline takes. the character's development is something so important in a novel and you've executed that so well and I really admire the writing style as well.
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Awesome. Next chpters please. Good mix of stories. Antimainstream. More thrillers. Nick is kind, but very stubborn. Then, what will happen to their child? Exciting adventure. I can't imagine if I was there. Nick Nick. I hate u but i love u.
I just recently bumped and read this novel and I say this is kind of underrated with a bigger potential. Well written and deserve to get a full five stars! If you are looking for a story with gaming vibe, don't hesitate and start reading this now.
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This is one of those rare cultivation novels that actually tackle issues that are a bit more serious than 'arrogant young masters' and injustice. The MC is likable and, fortunately, so he's far from becoming an inhumane monster. As for writing quality and world building, these aspects are simply great! I hope that the author can keep it up cause this novel has a great potential!
It maybe good novel, I’m not sure bc I feel this novel is copy and paste it from mtl.
I dropped this novel when he starts drolling over the women because of their heavenly beauty. It's not my cup of tea.if you are okay with MC getting hypnotised by beauty of every women around him, than this novel is for you.
it's really really good. honestly, the only problem I have is that I'm gonna have to make a billion accounts so that I can get up to date XDand there is indeed the con of 1 chapter every three days, but at least it's stable on that. rather than maybe early maybe late. anyways, great job author san
This sounds alright has anyone got the raws for this novel ..................................???????????????????????ggghhhhhhbnjgggh God dam the 150 character rule