thehumanbeing

Once I started reading I just couldn't put it down...I finished reading it within a few days and I'm so excited for more to come im so glad that I don't have to use a bunch of fast passes to read like almost every other novel thanks so much for that

Ot was entertaining until chapter 40 that become Mtl. Just another scam

A hidden gem that unfortunately will never be fully polished.

Remember what we asked for in this platform? Sword. And spice it up with dual cultivator and devil. Yeah, if that's not awesome enough for you then I don't what is.To the author, keep it up man. I hope this novel gets what its worth of...the first prize of the WPC maybe? Story must be told.

It's not a serious novel, far from it, however it is fairly funny. The plot device of the system allows the author to generate conflicts without it being implausible. Sometimes terms are translated differently, like names of spells/techniques or names of people, however, you'll pick it up.The world background is still developing at chapter 1670.

WOW!!! How is this story not in the top 100 yet?!?!?!?!For the first time in my life I literally ejaculated just by reading this erotic novel. I love the pacing of the story, the sensory scenes, the character development, and the wise things the MC says. I feel so emotionally attached to his main harem and I love how hard he is trying to make them happy. This novel is definitely in my top 10 and I recommend it to anyone that likes a good ero-novel. Please keep writing more chapters!BTW, I DON'T CARE WHAT ANYONE SAYS, LI LIAN IS THE BEST GIRL!

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blah blah blah he is too handsome bloody handsome fuuckkkkkg handsome even his mother willing to fuuuuck him that's how much of handsome of he is

The story is fast paced and has the potential to shine as the author further dwells into the happenings.Though there are a few grammatical errors, it doesn't take away from the overall sentence structures and is a good read.There area few horror scenes that are not my cup of tea but then am a faint-hearted person.Expect more quality work from the author.

So first off, not my cup of tea so take what I say with a grain of salt...To avoid spoilers, lets just say that this story is missing some tags. Like "Tragedy

Review of the first 15 chapters~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~If someone were to live for 10 thousand years, then his actions would be very different from a normal human.Our MC supposedly lived that long and yet acts like kid, it's mentioned times how arrogant he was in his previous life and how strong willed he was and yet again act like a kid.Somewhere in the story he get kicked out of his class and he gets shocked, i don't see why a 10 thousand year old Being, who fully knew how bad he was performing and how his teachers hated him gets shocked by such decisions. His background is just for show and never really reflects on him. The story doesn't adds up, its like the author had bunch of ideas but didn't know how to stick them together so he just decided to mention all of them without making a relation.

It's not even released yet (nor i never read it before).. but even though, i can sense the cliches..lots of them..i can feel it..they're coming!no one will save us!thestatsguy has already fallen.there's no hope left for all of us!. . .i cry.