A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.
i really liked the story,grammar can improve significantly,but it is understandable to enjoy,my biggest issue with this story is i you haven't used "" when characters speak which makes it a problem when reading
I really enjoyed this book. Even though I hate system and leveling novel but this one is the best keep your good work author.....,............and continue writing ❤️
This novel has some potential but unfortunately webnovel just puts it in que and goes nowhere then you will never know if it could be better or just another ok novel
First of all .All the best Keep on doing this best wishes. Really very intresting novel Need more novel and that also will be intresting think so do ur best U will get full support from us .Never give up for any Thing All the best
Lots cringe moments ruins the novel for meThe protagonist spends most of the chapters pretending to be cool but comes of like an edgelord His companion praises him for doing ordinary and unremarkable things (I cringed every time)However the writing is decent except for poor sentence structure (too much rambling and repetition)Worldbuilding is shallow... what with the info dumps in a constant attempt to compensatePlot is there and it is consistent for the most part but relies on the idiot ball tactic at timesWorst is the tone of the novel... almost all characters showcase snark and tantrums, dialogues sound immature and the tension is all but none existent... so it is no word i feel cringe almost every chapterOverall well written but misguided... If only there wasn't such a blatant attempt at making everything look cool because often the result is the opposite
Review chap 150 Well already know that I was very mixed at the beginning, it goes much too fast for my taste and the first "Tier" are quickly skipped, nevertheless from chapter 100~, things start to become interesting, the novel take a normal pace ...Well clearly I think the author didn't want to do TLM and make 300 chapter where the hero is as weak as the others, but I understand why some people give up...For my part I liked it, I even bought the privilege because now it's really great!
Nobodies mentioning it so I’m going to. This story suffers in only one way and that’s the social interactions. They feel very childlike and basic. Also the mc has some annoying traits as far as social interactions go and it’s off putting. Otherwise it’s a decent read.
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This novel surprised me greatly. I'm not sure what I expected going into this story, but I wasn't expecting to enjoy it so much. This was an incredibly relaxing story to read. Usually when I get sucked into a story it's because it's exciting or I'm intrigued to know more, but the best way I can think of to describe this story was I was comfortably snuggled up in bed and didn't want to get up.Characters - We'll start with the MC. Probably what makes you feel relaxed the most. He's a very peaceful and spiritual person, very knowledgeable, and handles life in a smooth manner as is fitting of his raising. He follows his heart and just his way of handling life is something that I really wish I had in my life.The side characters are significantly better than you'd expect from a livestream audience. While only a few of them have been named or interacted with, there is still subtle details and character hidden in the interactions. I'm hoping some of these characters stick around long term to watch the MC's rise.World -World building is a bit slack here, but it's not something to dock the story on. It's a modern day world, probably Earth, and that's about it. This isn't really a story that so far has needed extensive world building and background though, and what is needed exists.Style -This is where the story shines for me. The relaxed feel, the smooth information and knowledge dumps, the details about nature and the world around the MC. All of it just combines to make this story really stand out to me.Overall - I'm off to find and read the MTL after posting this. Hopefully it's not too bad, because I really want to just keep reading. I haven't felt this good after reading something in a long time. No excitement or heart racing, just want to keep staying in this comfy bed a little longer.
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I love eveutnkng about the book... keep up the good work... I like the fact that Henry is not at all pertirbed and it is good to have a hero who doesn’t get beaten often.. He is ideal