CaptainSadistic
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
You read a story and you don't like the ending. You also prepare your own end. So is this story. The reader changes the story he/she wants behind his/her name. Their stories are long and cliche.
The synopsis was a good one, it was well written as well as the chapters. Characterization was also on point. The author also did good with the description.It’s been a while since I read this type of novel though but I really enjoyed it and I highly recommend.
Your stories are amazing keep it up I love themUngovernable I have a great day and I will be a good time to get the same as the only thing I can
stop giving low rating when you haven't even read atleast 10 chapters. I saw like 7 people atleast didn't even read it and just give this one 1 star like ok.
It's good so far.seem well thought out. I too hope he keeps at .I really like how the lead character seem just a normal person who got something exstrodnarry but not losing himself.
The information given in the book was very good for young and awe-inspiring writers, and it would be one of the most helpful sources. I am an author myself, and I liked the overall impact. Arigato!
Oye que pasa con está muerda de MC tonto es que tú también eres un tonto e inútil?????? simple mente estás arruinando está novela!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!¡¡!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!¡
This the second novel after The God Of Games that i really want to read and spend all my fast pass. What? You dont like this novel? Just delete your Webnovel account and destroy you're phone you degenerate scum
Readers are in for a world of pain as far as cultivation terms are concerned. Although GGP's translation is acceptable. He leaves a lot of terms in pinyin. I myself had to do a lot of research to understand a lot of terms in BTTH. I mean Dou = Battle. Wang = King ( maybe?) Huang=? I only know that Di = Emperor ( From AGM ). As far as IET's novels are concerned a lot of mythologies are included if you want to enjoy the story you have 2 options.1) Convince GGP to do what RWX does.2) Search for it yourself.As far as the novel is concerned I believe IET ain't screwing it up. So enjoy my fellow readers!
I actually liked the novel for the first few hundred chapters, but somehow the mc degressed to a psychopathic hypocrite. He is searching for the slightest imagined insult to rob, it would be ok if he were described as an evil character, but the writing style suggests he is something like a hero.The farm setting develops into a background setting, conceptually it is more like a system that evolves or multiplies what it is given.It´s like someone wanted to create a unique system but had no idea how or what it should do
