The storyline was made very well, especially the story of the ml who fights for his life, has self-development and is eager to gain more knowledge all the time. I really like this character and want to watch him grow up. So, I'll wait to see his progression. Keep fighting, Bai Zhe!!
Aunque al principio era muy tedioso al leer pero desde el cuarto capitulo fue mejorando está que lo leí en un día los 58 capitulo y me quede con deseos de mas
The author's creativity and imaginative skills are at par. The writer thoughts are well projected and the plot itself is intriguing. The language too was easy and there wasn't much hassle in understanding. The background and character design was vivid. I feel the chapters are a bit shorter and the cover can be a little interesting.
Overall, it's an interesting novel to read.
don't overcomplicate sentences, make it simple if you can. i want to read novel, not study journal. it's uncomfortable to read. i just skim through the chapter. 10 chaps is all i can do. the first few chapters are good, it gone downhill after mc transmigration(?) to the past, i don't know why, i just lost the will to read the rest, it's just felt uncomfortable to read.it has good potential. my advice is, let your friend read it first before posting it in WN
This is a different take on witches. And for once, the sacrifice isn't female lol. The writing is good though there r some sentences tht r too long. But, overall it is easy to understand. The plot itself is already intriguing from the synopsis. The king himself failed to follow the tradition. I'm quite curious if there would be a curse befalling the prince. On another note, the world building is superb. I love the bg narration and the naming sounds realistic for some reason.Keep up the good work, Author! Good luck!
Grammar make it impossible for me to read it + several obvious problem with mc character (lack of explanation for the change of caracter Et….)
I think author should delete the spammed reviews because it's too much. Anyways, the plot and concept is kinda interesting but the execution is lacking. HAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHE HIHIHIHI HOHOHOHO HUHUHUHUHU HAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHE HIHIHIHI HOHOHOHO HUHUHUHUHUHAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHE HIHIHIHI HOHOHOHO HUHUHUHUHUl
Alright, this novel has one of my least favorite tropes. Nice-guy assassin. Those two tropes just don't work well together.First off, the main character. The best assassin from a fantasy world, can even kill Kings and Queens. Is almost caught on his very first job. He is supposedly a assassin but in reality hes just a vigilante. Side characters. Another review basically talks about this perfectly. All the characters are template characters. Cop who relies on intuition, girl whos a battle maniac, cute little sister, grumpy older brother, super-genius kid who can hack into anything. Plot & writing quality. First off, this novel definitely has a amateurish tinge to it, but seems somewhat refined. The plot, however, seems super forced and is rather boring. Gang members beat up the main character's brother, he beats them up. They come back, with more, because? (This is a world with martial artists, why are these guys so keen on killing themselves) Anyway, he beats them up, takes pity on them, once again because? He decides to kill all the gangs nearby because of some pity story the guy told him. Later, when a cop invited him to dinner a young master decided to beat him up. He beat them up instead, and now decided to destroy his entire company and family. Good ol' vigilantism. It just seems rather forced, especially that young master part. (Again, there are literally martial artists in this world, the young master doesn't have a single martial artist)Anyway, another gripe I have with this novel is "intuition". God it's annoying. A lot of novels go with this really forced way of advancing the plot. A random copy intuitively knows that the main character somehow committed the crime of killing gang members, so she invites him to dinner. A random battle-junky intuitively knows that the MC is the one who fought her before. (he was completely covered in black, no resemblance) Overall, a amateurish novel that is rather low quality in general.
This book is pretty awesome, I started reading it and the world development along with the character starting point was incredible! This is a really good storyline and has a ton of potential, however this author is obviously very new, he over explains everything. The progress is infuriatingly slow and it takes forever for anything to happen. I’m sure as the book goes on till get better but for now it’s kinda hard to read.
Chandu senpai is very pog so i will vote 5 stars. I also secretly love chandu senpai so that's also another reason to vote 5 star. Also it's atractive to see Chandu write.
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super enjoying the charachter developments is quite good the story is quite slow