Good start it the it's just unreadable later on and it makes u pay for itSo I would just not. Read it ..,.................................
k... the novel is fine but there are a lot of things to improve on it, starting with.1. Its been a while now since a lot of people point out that you wrote 28 years old in chapter 1 when it should be 18 and it still hasnt been fixed despite you thanking a reader for pointing it out and its been months!!!!.2.world announcements as sometimes it shows the level of the monster, others, it dosnt. Its important for the level to be known as its a difference killing a lvl 10 boss while being same level than killing it while being lvl 30 for example.3.At the start, it was said that the time was twice as long in the game but then it was said that it was only 12 hours longer and then it got increased that 1 real-world day is 2 days inside which is what was said from the start.....3. the stats of Amanda in the game are way to high for someone level 7, her stats are 119 in total - 30 stats per level - 60 stats supposing she got all 10 like shadow = 29... Meaning her equipment adds 29 points to her stats in total, thats way to much...... either its that way, she got more than 10 in stats at the start or you messed that up.4. It bothers me a lot the start of the novel with Shadow and Amanda having to run for accidentally instantly killing the senator's son by making him trip on a rock... even if that was enough to damage his head it won't be enough to instantly kill the guy unless he was to fall on his head from a few meters and im sure that he could have reached the hospital alive even if he were to die from bleeding inside the head.4. it wasnt stated how the gang found out that mc "killed" the rich guy son.5. how come Amanda was working full time as the boss of a restaurant if she was THAT good in the game and she could earn thousands dollars... dosnt makes sense and she is even higher level than MC and he is OP6. Amanda's friend Jeny seems to be from a powerful family, how come she couldn't help Amanda from the rich guy? From what i can see, Jeny could have helped Amanda with no problems 7. how is it possible for a normal guy and girl to escape a hunt from a criminal gang plus the justice for killing a person, not to mention the senator's son!!!, the pair would captured fast and easy as they had a criminal organization and the government searching for them.... and even him becoming a high paid assassin while doing so lol... where did he even get the money for that!!9. The mc calls little girl the sister of his friend but she is 18 years old, same age as the mc.... LOL10. why he didnt buy a helmet for Tina? the sister of his best friend?11. The mc wants money but as soon as he gets a new equipment he tosses the one he had out! lol, he can sell those!12. Not much is known about the classes, not even the assasin class as what they can or cant do... Such as use 1 or 2 daggers13. No world announcement was given when the mc CREATED a skill... you would think that such an amazing thing would create a world annoucement but nothing happened...All things considered, this leads me to believe that you dont have any guide while writing this nor you are keeping track of things. Its likely that you must go back to read what you wrote on X chapter to remember instead of writing down important things on a separate file. I recommend using excel or google sheets to keep track of thingsK... try to improve the world background a little and give some more physycal description of your characters. Pls be consistent with the information given
As I made a review on the Lord's Empire, I'll do the same here. A short one-A better version of the two stories that were transferred from GT, it's like their noble first born son or something. Here's to hoping they'll transfer Records of the Human Emperor as well.
ztj was trash, so i really have no idea should i even start this novel ? i am a fun of slow paced novels, novels about cultivation... (not about suffering)but not about 15 y.o. ***** who is thinking about herself as a phoenyx, and interactions for no reason and logic... and yes, i read it to the end. (ending was especially great ;))) )is this another novel with mc who has no backbone ?someone in comments said that those who didn`t like ZTJ are stupid, and don`t like slow pace. but i have to disagree.if you are an ***** person, you will find it absurd to read about mc of ZTJ his logic, and actions.
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First time I’v been forced to drop a review on a novel. Summed up in 3 words. Pile of garbage. The character was all over the place. Levelling system can’t even be considered a system. No explanation on things. World development is awful. I held hope it would get better but nope it got worse and worse with 0 objective or aim. Goes on to say “oh I’ll keep a low profile by not doing this” and next second does the thing he just mentioned not to do. Absolute waste of time.
I great story that mixes a video game concept together with Eastern fantasy.The world is well portrayed and it is peeled layer by layer.There is a lot of information around the system and abilities. The fight scenes are some of the best ever written, the words just pop write into your imagination. Pity that the story is still quite short.Once you start you just can't stop
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I just read this work and it looks new. But I'm quite interested in the portrayal of the character, I hope the story is really good in the future. I'm waiting for the next update
I said in my previous review I'll edit the ratings I first gave so this is my edited review.First, the writing quality is 4/5, I can't use the MTL I read to rate this for its quality since I can't read chinese characters.Story development is 3/5, its not bad, but from what I can read, its not that good either, just the usual face slapping.Character design is 3/5 too, why? Because from what I can read, the characters other than MC and FL is generic, there are no depths.You may have noticed I am using "from what I can read" the reasonfor that is:update stability: 2/5, I don't know if author dropped it, or is in hiatus, but the last update was december 2021, and it ended at chapter 49, I don't know if webnovel have the chapter 50 and above, but yeah, 49 is the last update. I want to put 1/5 in there but because I don't know if webnovel have the rest, I will put 2 for now, will edit again if they have the rest of chapters.world build is 3/5, because from the chapters, you can't get enough info from the world the characters are living in.
I have read up to Chapter 100 at this point of this review. This review is about the negatives of the story til Chapter 100.1. MC is Lvl 6 as of then. However, the issue is that MC has past knowledge of game-changing events and takes advantage of this. Making him really OP.He has way way above average attibutes. He also obtains the Silvermoon Set Equipment - said to be the best for players below Lvl 10. He has a Magic Weapon and a Secret Silver Weapon. He also has a Forging Exp Bonus too. With his current stats, he is able to defeat Monsters with at least 5 Lvls above him, when other Veteran Elites cannot due to the stat/equipment difference.He also completes Uniques Quests, obtaining him huge amounts of Exp, thus others can nvr get these Quests again.This would lead you to think that MC is the only player to hit Lvl 6. However, it is not the fact.So how then, did the other Lvl 6 players, who neither have the knowledge of the game as MC, nor do they have the Stats or Equipment as MC, even obtain enough Exp to hit Lvl 6?MC can deal 100+ Damage to high-levelled Monsters as compared to an Elite Party who can only deal single digit damage to such Monsters.MC farming rate is obvs way higher than the others....but somehow they still manage to catch up with the MC. Ridiculous!2. Blackie and co has 8 Lvl 2-3 Bronze Equipment on each of them after grinding at an undisclosed and uncompeted high-levelled area as advised by MC. After meeting up with him for the Team Dungeon, they swap into Lvl 5 Bronze Equipment which the MC obtained during his various Unique Quests alone.At the Team Dungeon, somehow Gentle Snow and her Party have already obtained Myst-Iron aset Equipment and she has a Secret Silver Weapon. This was just after they only had Bronze Equipment approximately a few hours before they left MC during one of his harder Unique Quests - To obtain the Titan's Heart.How then, did they obtain Myst-Iron Set Equipment, if they did not have such a premium location as Blackie and co? They do not have a Forger who can forge Myst-Iron Equipment nor can they complete Quests of MC's lvl due to their lack of game knowldge and skill stats.It is like the Set Equipment miraculously appeared in their Inventory. Plus it was her whole Party not her alone!Flabbergasted!3. The average Elite has Bronze Equipment of Lvl 2-3, since they can neither obtain Lvl 5 Bronze Equipment due to not having MC's prowess in defeating high-lvl Monsters.Yet they say that Blackie and co's Lvl 5 Bronze Equipment is low-lvled....Umm what?! Do they have Lvl 10 Bronze Equipment?Outrageous!4. Females in this novel is mostly portrayed as wanting to go and warm the beds with anyonr who is deemed stronger than them, apart from Gentle Snow and Violet Storm. The author has some serious issues regarding females. If this puts you off, but want to read, you better brace yourself as in the past 100 chapters there have been 4-5 occassions... and I bet there will be more in the later chapters.Disgusting!5. Equipment Rarity ranges from Trash, Common, Bronze, Myst-Iron, Secret-Silver, Fine-Gold, Dark-Gold, and Epic.At least Magic Weapons are introduced with a backstory.However, suddenly there is a Legendary tier which is not even introduced before. And it is mentioned quite often without any backstory.Puzzling!Overall, what I cant stand about this novel so far is the lack of consistency in some areas. The author probably did not want the MC and his Party to be so OP, but forgot about the difference in MC and the others - His expertise of the game due to his reincarnation. And this led to plot holes in the story.
Just love the FL character. I'm so interested in reading more of it