This is my current favorite read on the site. for anyone who has issues with Cain's personality in the beginning, do not worry since it gets fixed pretty early in the novel. Cain is a very talented protagonist who doesn't constantly rely on the system for everything he does, which is nice. his path through cultivation is gained by himself, and the biggest direct effect the system has had on his strength as of Chapter 1000 is the bloodline awakening at the beginning of the story. If you are someone who enjoys an MC with immense battle power above his level, then you will like this novel. The romance is very brief, and although he does get multiple women, the novel doesn't feel harem much at all.
Copy of GATE with few devations for example divine machines and cutivation blablabla also the original author might be chinese because of naming and i think you already know what chinese novels turn to at 100..no 50 chaps.
The story is really good. I rlly enjoyed and I hope everyone else’s does too because this story is too good to be true. ? the characters are very in-depth and I like the futuristic theme of this story as well.
your novel is amazing, it has time travel, it has action, adventure and Mysterys the time travel arcs are very well done, character development is fast and very well written. I don't like it: the time travel arcs are creative but would leave people lost if you didn't pay close attention, in the chapters the world is vast and the magic system is similar to that of Harry Potter
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Nice. Everything seems perfectly balanced out
would have liked a slower start up with the heroines going more in depth about hearing Jake's thoughts but seems like it could be entertaining
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whoa~ calm down MC?when I read the second paragraph of the first chapter, the MC's personality is already showing and I love her for that. Throughout the chapter, I enjoyed it very much. You're the best, author for making me chuckle??✨
Will be honest about it. There are many grammatical mistakes which you need to correct. The plot is interesting and and so are the characters. I've ten chapters so far and I liked it. Keep updating and make us smile! Fighting Author! ?
seriously up there with Lord of mysteries and vampire system. I can't tell what's going to happen next it's a one of a kind boom even though it has classic tropes like a system and isekai give it a shot your not going to regret picking this up.
The story in general is quite good, with decent pacing and character development. However it sometimes feels repetitive with almost the exact same sequence of events almost being copied and pasted between story arcs. The MC is generally written well but sometimes there can be points where he seems stupid. In general the side characters seem to be given some development also, which is good to see rather than them just appearing for two chapters and the gone from all existence in the story.The only major criticism I have is the upload continuity of the author as initially the story was uploaded 2 chapters daily, then it dropped to 2 every other day then had a large absence, tho I believe this was due to the author's health. Now we have been without a release for a prolonged time again so I would encourage patients if you want to read this story.