Finally catch up to C31. Its really horrible! The author is very speciesist. All the villainous baddies are human, this is very biased, as if only human does bad things in this world. Don't he know that most readers here are human? he actually being disrespectful to most readers here. Don't he know cats and dogs also do bad things? Why don't he make some American Shorthairs as the baddies?Don't he know that a gang = a wolf pack? Why he make human group as gang, but not wolves or dogs? ever heard the term : "human race"? yeah, so basically the author is racist.
If you can get past the authors views it is a decent story with a ton of potentialOn-time updatesMeh character design (15 yo murderer with no qualms about killing though this is sort of explained)Pretty good quality compared to othersIn no ways is it perfect but it has good qualitiesP.S I dont think the authors views should be taken into account when rating the quality of a story
This is an amazing book with great characters and Worldbuilding if you want to learn more about taoist myths and culture in a fun and interesting way than this is the book
I CAN HARDLY READ IT BECOZ OF THE TERRIBLE ENGLISH. PLS CAN YOU FIX IT.
You scum translate a novel only to 40 chapters and lock any new chapters behind a classist paywall/language wall. You scum don't even provide information for how to find the original novel so a millionaire can fan translate it for personal consumption. You scum love money more than what stories can do for the well-being of Humanity.
The story has its faults, but there is a noticeable growth for the author, so I expect this to change into a good story at some point. Author does sadly need an editor to help him or her out with the whole process, as there are mistakes and repetitiveness in the chapters.
Please come back quickly. We will miss you. Don't you dare to drop this novel okay??????Until next time!....................................
Only read a few chapters, but what I can say, this book is creative. Usually I don’t pick up video game novels on here, but this one drew me in.Galanar has a way with words and I already know the character development and action will only get better. The world building flows like a live action and I have to remind myself I’m reading. ? don’t pass this up, and the author definitely deserves gifts, golden tickets, and power stones. He literally shoots chapters out for his fans, and let me tell you. More than two chapters a day is defficult for me even. So please support him! The more time he has to be able to sit and type at the computer the more chapters you’ll get. Let’s get him at the top. ?
I’m literally on chapter 5 and I’m hooked. The best thing about this story isn’t even the characters or the world building, it’s the community including the author. Just reading the comments as I go has me dying laughing.
Great workThe only bad thing is the beginning (The first 10 chapter) there many info dump but it’s improved after that ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Story so far so good. I haven't read such a system novel till now so I don't know if it's new to others too but this is really a good one. MC is weak in real life plays games gets screwed up starts again. Might sound cliche but the way its done is different and the best part is the system and its hilarious missions. Jannus is just too good to MC giving such missions to make him stronger. Keep going author.
in my opinion i believe that this is an awesome story. im currently on chapter 130 and i cant see why the ratings is on 3.8. i mean sure the grammar isnt the best but its not like you have to turn your brain off to read it. the thing it lacks most is the the commas. sometimes its pretty hard to read when theres no seperation and i had to peice some if the words tigether in my mind. anyway im only on chapter 130 and havent read the whole thing hence i cant say anything else other than how its going pretty good so far.