Read up to 38 so far. I like it so far as a whole, but something about the writing style bothers me. I either don't know what the problem is or can't put it in words. Will keep reading.
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Hi again, it's the tenth review so I thought to write it myself then :DFor those who are new to the novel, this is a pure game based one for game nerds like me. Most of events are focused on the game and inside game competitions and struggles, challenges and difficulties, ups and downs of the MC while he builds a huge guild, intelligence organization, and finally a bandit group that will reign terror in the game.The first chapter is about most of preparations I had already made for the novel. You can check it but don't feel lost there, as all these info will appear gradually in the game, within its appropriate context and time.Finally I hope this novel satisfies all of game addicts like me, and your support is appreciated.
I think this is the best novel I have written so far and I'm inviting everyone to read it. You will not regret and I promise you will get hooked right from the start <3
Its so good but he hasent updated in a month do i guess its been droppedIm sad it was Sooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooooood
It was a good ride
tl.dr: One of the best Chinese VR novels translated. Overall a top 5 online novels VR novel. Generic story-line, however well written, with somewhat flushed out characters, good combat system and an interesting plot.--Characters--Characters in this novel are often intelligent, however not overly arrogant. As of this review, while their was one unrealistic action the MC has done, overall their is logic to the MC. He tries his best to be low key, while not degrading into someone who is unreasonably afraid of achievement, while at the same time is not afraid to exploit his advantages to a reasonable extent. The time travel element, adds reason to why the MC does certain things. It is also refreshing to see a MC who knows when to retreat and not just mindlessly offend people, just to further the plot.Unfortunately, the regrets before his rebirth, his girlfriend, and anything he did previous to his rebirth is completely neglected. The only relevance the rebirth has, is giving future game knowledge to the MC. There is no reminisce or drive that comes from the rebirth past the first few chapters.--Plot (contains minor spoiler)--The plot of the story is a generic plot in which the MC is reborn with game knowledge and uses this knowledge to obtain hidden advantages. As of writing this review (ch.51) the MC uses his knowledge to exploit a bug and solo a world boss, finds a unique item which he exploits to get an advantage over others(gold likewise), as well as strategies to clear dungeons. Though the plot is cliche, it works, other components are strong enough to cover this weakness.--Combat System and it's Effect on Plot--My personal favorite part of the novel is the combat system, which though not heavily covered, I believe adds lots of depth to the novel. The combat system is split into two systems the manual system, and the automatic system. Though initially the manual system is far less efficient than the automatic combat system through continuous effort, one becomes more optimal using manual combat. I believe that because the main reason for the MC advantage over others is mostly due to the innate knowledge of the benefits of the manual system, it makes the story far easier to swallow, then if for example, the MC found an OP item that made him better in any way possible. Due to the MC's constant growth through the higher completion of combos in the combat system, I feel the story is less stagnant then it would be without it.--World Building--Overall the novel does a good job at building up the setting for the novel. The massive effect this VR has on the world is sufficiently explained, with the flexibility of the VR world itself allowing for unique situations, such that its hard to make the story stale. The realism, in that there are still bugs and exploits, allows for the world to be more immersive, as it is easier to relate to, and overall the story does a good job.
Incredible story telling, gripping fight scenes, and wonderful training arcs - the training arcs were awesome
The story is fairly interesting and well written until around chapter 60. After this point, it changes from either a fairly well edited MTL or proper translation to what seems like RAW MTL.If this novel was properly translated, I would probably give give it a solid 4/5. Below are some chapter 62 MTL lines you can start to expect from chapter 61 forward: - In the ring, Gu Changge appeared, who was going to be two unhelpful Yan Ji.- "Since then, this one has been severed. You have joined Gu Changge to deal with me. Now that you finally show your true colors?"- Gu Changge owns are very possessive.I feel it's quite unfortunate that the first 60 chapters are fairly well translated, because it means the punch to the brain that is trying to read chapters 61 onwards hurts more. If you hate raw machine translated content, stay away. I'm dropping at chapter 62.
I've already read "Rise of the Demon God
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Although right now Im only here for xp, I still recommend you guys to read this. This books is a bomb and the characters are also amazing and well written