Pretty good read at this point, I'll update when I reach the 60th chapter, it's really original and a lot better than the other pre-read of this week, hope it's get selected soon.AAAAAAAAQSSSSSSSSSSSQSSAZSDAZDQFQFQSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSQS
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This is a weird book, true to its name. It's like the expression diamond in the rough, except the person describing the diamond can only see each plane of it independently from the others in a house of mirrors and doesn't know what a diamond is. Confused? Now you're getting somewhere.
The novels have become frivolous, boring, and perverted because of the author. He needs to read my comment just to benefit: the handsome hero with a friendly and kind family, a beautiful and warm mother, a beautiful or domineering sister, a likable and shy little brother, and a strong-hearted father, of course always the hero's family people They are good and enforce the law and love people of course they are angels, you will not find the hero's family of sadistic villains, thieves and murderers. And all the girls in the world of course only who have a dazzling beauty need his help, and those poor little girls feel the responsibility to help and save them, the hero whose biggest concern when he gets super power is to save humanity and the world. Something disgusting and vulgar all the novels have become a deviant character. The reader hates such novels because they have nothing to do with human truth, because they depict angels of peace and love. We wish the authors to change this trivial pattern and show us the true human instincts. Selfishness, anger, murder, theft, arrogance, pride, fraud, deception, impersonal, self-interested, does not care about anyone, does not interfere in the affairs of others, does not help people, this is how the novel will become interesting You will not be able to predict the actions of the characters The events will become unexpected And enthusiastic, and it will bring a new revolution in the field of novels because such a character does not exist. There is one novel that I know is Revenend insanity. I guarantee you the success of your novel even if you are a beginner. Don't make the hero crazy, don't make him stupid, make him only care about his interests
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This seems like an interesting read so I decide to pick it up. I wasn't disappointed since many story have something cliche about them. But it has a good plot so I want to say keep up the good work????????????
This novel feels more like wuxia instead of Xianxia. Most of us read Chinese novels for enjoyment but this novel offers almost zero enjoyment. Perhaps it would be change in future but so far it's a dull read. The translations are fine but they could use some polishing (Yao race=Monster race. Yao core=monster core).
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I need new chapter Qiuyue(6) ???????????,???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Will you continue this translation, Translator-san?
I got the feeling that this novel might be good because it reminds me of Leylin Farlier when i saw the word IMMORTALITY . zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz . And honestly though qidian boys , do i really need to put bunch of "Z" every time i comment since i can't comments if there isn't enough letters . Smh
I’ve loved this so much, after I caught up I can’t wait for more and check several times daily…. Please keep the story going and I can’t wait to see more and more of it to come…..I’ve read till chapter 541 so far and the cliffhanger. I wanna know what happens next so badly