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I can feel it he’s cooking ? yeah it’s a pretty good novel I just started reading so I can’t say much but let my boy cook.
It's not bad. Actually, it's pretty interesting. The only issue I have with this sitory is the fact that it's quite obviously written by AI (or at least heavily modified by it) so that it's very VERY noticeable in every paragraph if you know how AI usually writes these kind of things, but other than making me roll my eyes it's not that big of an issue imo (but only because in my case I'm used to reading MTLs so it's not that much of a problem to me)
Honestly, as far as AI stories go, this one is pretty good. If you like football I recommend you at least giving this one a chance, maybe you'll like it.
I am not one to leave a review for myself but I do want you to to read it and give me your opinions so I can accurately adjust it. I love my story and want it to do well but if my audience doesn't like then I'm taking the wrong approach.
really really sad because i’m reading this on other sites since they gave up translating and the one i’m reading sucks
d*mn imma have to reread or else I wouldn't be able to post a review, my memories all jumbled and sh*t now. still smacking myself for not having a backup file for all the novels I've written a review before the great reset.
lmao good to know, have you read author other work? warlock of the magus world, I feel like you'd preferr that typa MC more, he schemes and is calculative and only does things in his favour, doesnt mind helping peope if he gets benefits, but is ruthless to people who make use of him and will kill without hesitation and mercy, the progression is also nice, it even has a sequel
Love it
It’s an adorable book
great ending
thanks sweet author
Excellent story..loved Nora!
Really enjoying the depth and diversity of the characters
The book just finished like that. Felt so rushed ...
