thank you author
nice story, no dramas and its real as in daily life ?
love the few chapters read of the 2nd book, when can we see updated chaoters?
A good story. The switches between past, present and her two lifetimes were a bit confusing but in general I enjoyed the narrative and the development of the mystery of her death and the birth of her new love! Well done author!
It’s a okay story, too much drama and the leads are easily manipulated and very dumb. They don’t learn from previous mistakes and the family is narcissistic and selfish, it’s just a lot going on all at once.
Derrick is such as asshole. The author is so cruel in developing character who wanna kill babies . I hate such pathetic stories… never ending stupid drama.. do not recommend this book
Sounds like the same boring story line, husband asks for divorce, wife is pregnant and regrets ..geez.
I love this...
I know life happens and things come up but at least let us know you’re still planning on continuing
Regarding the spoiler, it seems there's a confusion about the character Jiang Ping. The story mentions a 'lover tag' for a secondary relationship, not the main one. As for Jiang Ping's gender, the text is unclear, with translations alternating between she and he. However, it's important to note that there are no female characters in the SCI unit as per the original source material, possibly referring to a drama adaptation.
Regarding the BYT character, some readers interpret their actions differently. It's suggested that the author might not intend for the BYT to condone the rape of his brother by Gongsun. It's crucial to remember that interpretation can vary, and the author's intentions may not be explicitly stated.
Overall, the reviewer expresses their admiration for the story and its unique cases, despite these points of confusion. They are eagerly engaged in reading and hope for more chapters, though they request the author to pause for a while.
I have read this novel over and over again, I'm a fan for the Author writing in this! It's like I'm absorbed into the novel and also fighting alongside the Characters.
They're so detail and well-written, love the world building too, especially when this is the first time I ever saw Omegaverse world being built from scratch, It's so refreshing.
The core issue I face with the narrative is the poor quality of writing. Here are some specific examples:
1. The author frequently restates the same points and emphasizes the obvious, which becomes redundant.
2. The character description of the main character (MC) is excessive, focusing on her age, beauty, and self-obsession, with instances where she admires herself, which feels repetitive and overdone.
3. There are chapters that feel unnecessarily drawn out, lacking substance and resembling empty filler content.
4. The story lacks depth and engaging character interactions. The clichéd villain who engages in predictable evil actions is the sole driving force for the plot. Even the action scenes were lackluster and unmemorable.
Despite its intriguing premise, the overall execution suffers due to these problems, which is why I'm giving it a mere two-star rating.