For me it's a no. Author writing some wet dream about 8yo surrounded by beauties (harem).............................................................
hey author/translator i hope your having a good break, i really like this book and i hope you can continue to relese more chapters all the best and have a nice day
I'm on the Empress's side. It's too bad. There are lots of characters who would question why the Empress had to kill him or who would accept it as their sacrifice meant something. This guy is ignorant to the core. There isn't even much to avenge. If that's the case, after reincarnating he'll want to get revenge on everyone who caused his death in every life? I've seen characters who had it thousands times worse than him but never had pitted out [justice]. (In this case it doesn't sound like you could ever use that word. The background and reasoning for his actions lacks depth and logic). Guess I won't be giving this a try, seeing as his not only did it not reel me in, but turned me away
This is a unique novel.I believe you guys understand it by reading it's description.I suggest it to both Old and New reader.I hope ? this get selectedAlso 40 chapter is low to judge this story.I hope 60 chapter Back
I read 60 chapters in a day ths this sign of a good novel ......... ....................................... ...... ....................................I......................................... ......
The pacing in this batch is absolutely relentless and I am here for it. Chapter 7 starts with an emotional confrontation between two friends, moves into a tender moment at the orphanage, then—BAM—cuts to the Prime Minister's Mansion where everything is falling apart. The transition is so sharp it almost hurts. One minute you're smiling at Shen Zhaoli and Zhou Qingyun's reunion, the next you're watching a household economy collapse in real time. And the structure within the mansion scene? Perfect escalation. First the accountant reveals the debt. Then Old Madam Xie accuses the servants of theft. Then they resign en masse. Then Xie Yuheng has to sell family assets to pay them. Each beat raises the stakes a little more, and by the time Su Qingxi offers her bracelet, you're breathless. But the real genius is the final paragraph. After all that tension, the author just... pivots. Spring flowers. A banquet. Grand Princess Shen Shuangyu's garden. It's like the story is taking a breath, letting you catch up before the next wave hits. The Spring Radiance Banquet is clearly the next major set piece, and I have zero doubt that every unresolved thread from this section is going to collide there. The only thing I'd change? Maybe give us a tiny moment of silence after the servants leave. Let Xie Yuheng feel the weight of what he's lost before the scene cuts away. But honestly, the breathless pace is probably intentional—the story mirrors his chaos.
First of all, thank you author for not dropping this fantastic novel, and now that u have started to edit and rewrite some parts of the story, btw which does feel quite an improvement. Just hope that it will now have chapter stability, also Take your time but please not much that people forget about the novel. Good work author and will try to support you in any way I can. Thanks!
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I HATE THE AUTHOR OF THIS BOOK BECAUSE HE NEVER FINISH ANY OF HIS NOVEL✌️I HATE THE AUTHOR OF THIS BOOK BECAUSE HE NEVER FINISH ANY OF HIS NOVEL✌️I HATE THE AUTHOR OF THIS BOOK BECAUSE HE NEVER FINISH ANY OF HIS NOVEL✌️I HATE THE AUTHOR OF THIS BOOK BECAUSE HE NEVER FINISH ANY OF HIS NOVEL✌️
The best football novel I have read until now. I love how you are introducing all the characters and you are describing his background. It is also amazing to see him draw skills/talents of popular football players. I personally would recommend this novel to the person who is reading this right now.
Novel sounds intersting, but from the review's it seems there is a lot of controvery regarding hte FMC. TBH i feel if the author did not include that part in the story, there would be very little taken away from the story and a whole lot more added in. Right now, myself and many other like minded readers would no doubt find this situation to be unappealing.Anyways, great story, but I can't read further especially with the FMC's situation at the back of my mind. I turly feel this novel could have made it to the top if you didn't have this aspect in your story. Good luck
Amazing story getting hooked since the first chapter