already read it like 22 chapter, is not rip off of RI, and thanks god it also not fan fiction. the power system in this novel little bit confusing, its like retard combination of generic cultivation novel with RI power system. and the cheat is not full automatic retard update, but still need some ingridient to enchant the gu.
this is such a dumb and stupid novel smh... not recommendedtranslation is bad very badand story is dumb and doesnt makes sense like at all no sense
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what the where is the rifts monsters coming out and 1 million people dying stuff which chapter?
The writer sounds like he knows the general storyline already, because the synopsis is basically begin>early>mid>late part of the story, or it all happens early xDeither way i'm excited for it, hope it gets picked. but it won't, they never do :(
this is a book which I wish I could give anti-energy stones to.MC is clearly a Mary Sue, he's given OP abilities, and then any time he has a problem which can't be solved by what has already been revealed, an other OP ability is received, there are no stakes, not tension, there is just the MC for most of it, and the other characters are paper thin, so there isn't any good character dynamics either.oh, and also, it doesn't even seem to hold consistent with its own logic.TL;DR: Do not waste your time reading this trash fire.
This is nice try to auther.I shure this book can give super experience for readers.This book has amazing story it can win my heart place❤️... It is historical story .. it has true insidenses.. good luck for this book..?
Jolie histoire, je ne sais pas pour les autres moi j’aime bien le fait tu n‘es pas rentré directement dans le vif du sujet, j’aime bien prendre mon temps de comprendre et de voir où l’on va. J’écris en français parce que j’ai constaté que le français est votre langue maternelle. Et oui il y a certaines erreurs et fautes de frappes mais cela ne rend pas médiocre ton travail pour autant. Continue et je constate que tu t’améliores aussi au fur et à mesure. El Howie les jumeaux sont exceptionnels et il y a leur ami la que j’aime bien mais le nom m’a échappé. Celui qui parle beaucoup et qui se fout pas mal de qui sont ses amis. Bonne chance
fake op mc waste of my time. wasn't exactly bad either hence the 3 stars so try it and see if its something you'll like. I just have zero patience for fake op mcs
Never been good at writing reviews, and this one might be biased too. All I can say is that this story checks everything that I wanted in a story. A Villain who is not dumb and plain evil. The MC here is quite grey. You could say that he's an Anti-Hero, but the Author says that he's a Villain for a reason and we will see him commit dreadfully evil deeds in the story. As long as he retains his emotions and knows how to cherish his family, I frankly don't care about what he does to other people. One thing that stands out in this story is the Harem of MC. Every girl that has been introduced so far is unique and is fleshed out. They are not just dolls who are 'Vases' in most Chinese Novels. With all the girls introduced so far, it's hard to pick your favourite. The world-building is very interesting and the Author is incorporating Eastern and Western elements in a way that they don't out off readers. Everything that has happened so far (Chapter 94) is a foreshadowing of what is about to come in this long story. Overall, I can't bring myself to rate it any less than a full 5 because I have absolutely loved everything about this story. Keep up the good work, Author! ?
this is by far the best out of all similar type of novel out there, the story is great, writing is good and a half, characters needs a little work, the the biggest problem I have is the info dump, please have your information dump in auxiliary chapter, and the time skip should be highlighted, and pov changes could be little smoother.
Seems nice, female lead is strong-willed. Very rare in your plot seems most other novels are like "I went back 300 years ago just to know the past". While yours be like ey, let's smack down to 8 years.
Anyway this is good. Nothing much to say, well done
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