i started reading this thinking it is an average gaming novel but the potential and way it is written make me believe it can go up to the level of King's avatar,but on the other hand grammar need a lot of work,use grammarly and write on Google docs it will help alot,am rooting for you and cheering ready for more chapters ??
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why so many this Batch have so much Nationalism?This Novel I say not worth itif you read it then RIP your CellPrevious last 2 Batchs most popular and Great Novels didn't get picked. Their Author was well know and their Books were in Top 5 rank.I bet again some trash gonna pick.
As of chapter 22 this story has proved to be a good read. Definitely recommended, although the source of his power is not known (mutation?) his experimentation and development of it is well thought out and well written. Minor cliches are present however they are perfectly reasonable and in fact add to the story to a truly entertaining degree. If the world is boring change it yourself!
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It is a good story ad i think you could make the girl of the water atribute to be the main fenale lead, up till now it have a nice flow of the events and keeps you very entretained ( honestly his childhood friend is not my favorite character feels to possesive and kind of make one alert at her selfish ideas of keeping the main from his harem, so my hope is that the cultivator chick can win over his heart and become his most beloved, she seems to have the best mind and character set to the story and the main mc, but this is just my way of thinking, either way is a fine novel).
Hey, everyone. Thank you for taking a look at my novel. As for many, this is my first attempt at writing, so I welcome constructive criticism.There will be many things - transmigration, a system with a small twist, earning money while trying to cultivate and navigate through school. I just have too many interests, but I believe I will be able to incorporate them all in a healthy way.There are two things I dislike in novels that first come to mind - meaningless nationalism and stupidly huge harems. I will try to address both. The school is, in fact, an international experimental school, and while I cannot refuse myself the pleasure of writing a harem novel, I will do my best to keep it romantic, realistic and not over-the-top. Also, this first chapter was just a test of site's functionality. Stable updates will start from August, 1.With that said, I shall shamelessly rate myself with 5 stars and invite you again to add Model Citizen to your library and take a look again in a few days!
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I like this story a lot.Stylish Demon can I help you by editing this story for you? I can help you fix it so the English is top-notch. I'll do it for free.
I think this is a good story, it just isn't hitting a spot for me personally. I think from what I have read so far the story is an enjoyable read and is going to build up to some really good things but at the moment this story isn't really hooking me in enough to read everyday. I think that the writing quality is good the characters are good and premise is good I just think that you should wait until chapter 50-80 to come to a definitive conclusion if you like the book or not. reading the Author's other's work I have a strong feeling this story is going to be really good.