I read beyond the free chapters. There is he/she mix ups. Somewhato pushy protagonist. Overal I would not recommen
Badly written what more can I say. MC is 2 dimensional, it's just pwp. And this 140character limit is the reason everyone has high reviews. What more do I have to write FFS.
Reminds me of scholar’s tech system a bit I hope it goes in that direction….
I really enjoyed his book. It is refreshing to have an MC that doesn't feel the need to save everyone, and I like how they have inner turmoil a lot. In autumn fall school I feel like a lot of the characters are going to be disposed of very quickly. You do focus on the main characters (I'd say Jaime, Lyra, max and brie) but characters such as Richard, Tory and the cat girl are going to be thrown away or a running gig. Like it seems that Richard could be just a pervet, no character development, although it is unlikely. Whilst girl I feel is very important, yet will still be a running gig. I could be completely wrong here, so sorry if I am.
this just copywriting from chinese novel, search 斗鱼之死亡判官 and you will find it, original chinese novel and FREE, if you not mind read it on MTL or Google translate.
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So much wasted potential good idea but bad implementation , you should rewrite it and tone down on revenge driven characters they are a lazy way to express the drive to overcome.
You really know how to pull one in. This is good.
I'm already hooked up to this book... can't wait to read more
AMAZING! Simply just love everything about it
This book is the hardest to put down
its a challenge reading it