I like that it's a new take on animal some are just the same dragon this or dragon that. but this one is new and unique. keep the good word writer.
Amazing opening chapter! I had literal goosebumps. I would prefer the use of past tense and small improvements that I saw others commented on. I love the storyline so far! Keep up the hard work!
?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I expected nothing when I started reading this but dang, this is great. I’ll give a brief review of the plot, please be warned that there would be light spoilers ahead.-The power system is Dao-heavy themed but the world is set on Post-apocalyptic Earth where ‘Mara’ runs rampant and the Qi & Heavenly Dao are polluted hence practioners have high chance of losing control-- mutation or going insane. MC crossed over to this world and woke up in an underground basement where there are only children of the same range of age as him aside from Professor Zhang-- who told them they are the “last of humanity” (these just screams Promised Neverland lol). And before MC woke up on this world, he received a system where he cultivates through being lazy.---Personal thoughts:Great plot, Good writing. A well-done combination of Cultivation and Post Apocalypse. Humorous. PETS. Moderate to Fast Paced. No harem. No faceslaps. No Arrogant Villain Characters. Recommended.> Author really did a great job writing this, it’s not bland at all. The story as a whole is light and humorous but sometimes there will be a dark, heavy feel and tënsion going on. > The world setting has a mystery surrounding it where in some chapters you’d noticed subtle hints about it. Also, it’s not an info dump. Author minced them apart, fed them to the readers in different chapters so you’ll get time to digest them and also retained a bit of mysterious effect.> The cultivation system, although a bit common but there are also unique points in it-- the terms used, cultivation techniques and rules PLUS the losing control part. IN WHICH the latter really really reminded me of Lord of the Mysteries hahaha. > System. The system also have its restrictions so it did not necessarily made him overpowered where he could facesmack everyone but just enough so he could survive and be labeled as ‘genius’. > Characters. Interaction between them may seem forced at first but it will flow smoothly and naturally later on. MC’s partners and their interactions are the comic relief of this series lol.> Great plus for cats and dogs!!! <3The only complaint I have is sometimes it’s just too fast paced and the MC. MC is sometimes dumb and sometimes smart. Make up your mind author! Lol. But overall, this is great great great.Review from c39.
Author needs a language course, it was very difficult reading this. Story could be interesting but needs a lot of work. 2.4 stars for effort.
Author, even though this novel was written, abruptly, but it has some good potential, so would like you to consider to continue it,if possible.
I've read a good number of chapters and have seen how the story is well written.It has a unique storyline. I love the writing quality and it makes me want to read further.
Interesting! The premise of a virus outbreak affecting both ecosystems and advanced technologies creates a compelling setting for a sci-fi novel. The author's creation of the Authonoid to combat the virus is an intriguing plot device. An update to further explore the characters' struggles against the outbreak and political unrest would be highly anticipated by readers.
Petition for Author-san to contenue "Supreme Authority".........................................................................................................................
This novel is totally underrated, it's not getting the exposure which it should. The ranking in terms of power stone is also above 100 and I seriously don't understand why, I'm only vote this novel but still. this novel is a hidden gem, try reading it and believe me u guys will be thankful, it's just awesome and what I love most about this novel is it's humor. The start is a bit slow, but you'll get addicted to this novel, you all will always be impatiently waiting for the next chapter to be released.
Your progression and story telling is way to rushed and crude.the way you started the story was nice but your follow through doesn't feel worth it at all....
booom ya love this story. I am the number ten to rate this what sup people. I recommend for ya to read this novel it is amazing ya will love it