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Even so, the benefits from the bangle would be enough for Mirai to take the risk.
The hard part would start now. Albus didn't stop running. He had never seen one in reality, but he knew a Snarghlah'ahd would appear to chase him and he also knew that… his chances of getting away alive were less than a percent. Snarghlah'ahd's had the exact opposite nature to a unicorn; there was nothing more capable of killing a unicorn than it. Albusflores had no spells that could cause even a scratch, even touching the beast would melt away his own body.
"August," Albusflores repeated, spacing out for a moment as he committed the name into his memory. That was a beautiful name. Fitting. End of summer in Ureal language and 'esteemed' in Aheal. "If it gets out that you are a dark dryad. So I'm sorry about-- that." He really was. His master… no, no one deserved to be persecuted for a idiotic reason like that. He felt tears falling down his cheeks. It was embarrassing to be a crybaby, but he really was sorry and he was too tired to control his own emotions. The connection he felt to his master made it all seem like he had endangered his own family and that was unforgivable for a unicorn.
Vegeta ceased his attack and teleported away, holding one hand at Kibo, Vegeta shouted, "Big Bang Bolt!"
"Fine. We'll just head straight to the bed then." He casually said walking around the pool. It took every ounce of his strength not to just put her in the pool and take her there.
Jun Lan felt this sudden urge to roast the bird, suppressing her anger, she spoke, her voice mellow.
Okay calm down, put away the fragile Black rose and take out something to beat the crap out of this insect. What should it be? I'd use magic but that's just a waste to use it on him, something that will hurt and maybe knock some teeth out.
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stop✋ you have to check out this book, it's is well detailed and the story development is simply out of this world
The story seems to borrow a lot from D&D and other sources, which can be a slight distraction, if you are familiar with those or looking to dig deeper into possible story paths. But if this doesn't bother you, this is a solid story, with a seemingly stable (read: not a total idiot who falls for or charms every female he comes across) MC. The concept of the necromancer, whose first priority is planting and protecting trees is great. World building is a little confusing and there are a few errors of syntax or names here and there. Easy to fix. Looking forward to seeing how the story progresses. Overall recommendation.
I like the story theme which is new and not cliche, this is very refreshing among the monotonous cultivation novels????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Hello, there, author. As promised, I'll give you brutally honest review.As I've said in the other day, you need to fix how you write the dialogue but I see no improvement.I mean, why you do you use "<" and ">" to separate the dialogues and paragraphs instead of ("Blas bla, bla.). Your story is good, but ruined by your ignorance to learn the proper writing techniques.good luck.
