Amazing book and story, wishing for more chapters soon
Well Shameless Author here. Rating this book 5 stars cause... well cause i can. it's my book after all. If you have any questions just leave a comment. And i hope you enjoy.
Author here!If you like Tensura (tensei slime datta ken), then you will absolutely love this novel. The MC uses inventions and ideas from the modern world, and uses it to create his own nation that leads a technological revolution in the world. Of course, since this is a world of magic, the MC figures out a way to combine both technology and magic into something completely different as well.As for action, there will be some eventually. Since the MC creates a nation, he will also build his own army to ward off kingdoms and nations that arent exactly okay with how fast the territory progresses.As for romance, there will be some eventually. Since the MC starts as a baby, he’ll have to grow up more before that starts to happen. The MC will be surrounded by women, but it won’t be a harem.If you like the novel, then please read, vote, comment, and review about what you like, what you don’t like, and what you want to see in the future.Happy reading! ??
this is a phenomenal read, I highly recommend it.(currently on ch.69 when writing this)
Your story is very good. If you post more chapters of the novel in a day then it will be more fun.
10,000 views, finally back on track from my original version of Welcoming the Chaos, thank you! I'm hoping I'll surpass my original views and looking towards the future for what's to come :)
The novel is good for what it is. It has great promise and makes you want to read more with the MC. But, you’ll soon find yourself skeptical of how the MC operates, how he knows so much technical-know-how in such diverse fields, and how he navigates the world he’s in to get what he wants. It seems too… easy. Even though you know, there is a practical and more believable alternative to getting what he wants. For example, instead of leveragint someone’s reputation to get a loan with no basis, put the building you own that has roughly similar value as collateral. Also, A lot of the things the MC gets away with or talks himself into getting, would not happen in the real world or be a lot harder.I feel as if the real world basics are not properly covered, such as some laws or policies as well as some world building, and as soon as a love interest is brought into it, the story begins to feel more forced than it felt before.I feel as if the novel just needs a lot more work.It’s ambitious and has a foundation, but it’s lacking.
Good so far just nothing like it and very unique. No faults in the writing or grammer and has a nice storyline so far. Keep up the good work!
oh i don't no if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss on how to improve your book performance, publications, profitability
Currently at chapter 8, I love it! This is a very, very interesting story. Please keep Mr. 'Because i can' a loner. ?
It's a good concept from what I've read so far. However it needs deeper world building and character design with more detailed arcs. Some fights were barely a paragraph long and most chapters ended in the same way.
put the gay tag bro... I read all of ur novels but don't bait me with a yaoi novel... even though I won't read it u have my 5 stars cuz I love u witch <3 and sorry I will remove my bookmark on this book