I hope this gets picked .??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I'm not bored which is important in reading the novel. I'm still at the early stages but I like what I'm reading so far, the updates is consistent and the MC is admirable with what he wants and how he goes about it. So this story will stay in my library.
that's a good book... but you should update more.
i really like this novel, it has new ideas, the grammar is alot better than in other novels, it has just a great all around feeling to it. Keep it up, im looking forward to new chapters :)
I really like this novel i like how right when he gets transported to mha world he not only becomes pain but thinks and acts like him and adds some of his ideologies in the novel.Good work i really am excited for every new chapter hopefully you can do a mass release one Day
I just read the entire story in one sitting its so good and first cricket fanfiction that I read, writing is also very good but I seriously hope this story isn't dropped, author please continue your story
Im sorry but to me this is not good one at all... Like I started reading this expecting to read about mc but most of the time (90%?) it just tells about movie plots, so its big fat NO from me
update please
Just started reading, but I already love this book!
I keep coming back to the consumption thing and how layered it is. On the surface, Shen Zhaozhao is faking a disease to escape chores. But consumption—tuberculosis—has this whole cultural weight in Chinese literature. It's associated with fragility, with beauty in sickness, with women who waste away and become objects of pity and protection. Shen Zhaozhao weaponizes all of that. She uses the appearance of being deathly ill to force Gu Shichuan's hand into marriage. 'Even if I have consumption... would you still marry me?' This is her turning weakness into power, sickness into a trap. The irony is that she's perfectly healthy—she was crying so hard last night her eyes are red, but otherwise fine. She's performing fragility as a strategic tool. And then there's the broader theme of performance throughout this entire passage. Wang Yurou performs innocence and victimhood. Fu Shixuan performs noble responsibility. Luo Erfen performs maternal authority while being absolutely tyrannical. Shen Zhaozhao performs illness. Everyone is playing a role, and the question that keeps haunting me is: who is the real Shen Zhaozhao underneath all these performances? The author keeps dropping little symbols—the 'fox-like air' the other young men whispered about, the vivid bold flower imagery around Shen Zhaozhao, the way she's described as 'a peerless blade' with 'cold, bloodthirsty light.' These aren't just decorative descriptions; they're building a portrait of a woman who has transformed from someone 'empty-headed' and 'easy to manipulate' into someone who understands that in this world, performance is survival. The consumption act isn't just a plot device—it's her declaring that she will use every tool available to her, even a fake disease, even pretended love, even whatever it takes.
Loved it. Looking forward to the next one
very interesting