The story is good but the Asura is to overpowered. If his opponents were just asking strong then it'd be better. Don't take this wrong, it's a good novel and keep up the work. ???
Pleeeeeaaase updaaaate pretty pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaseeeeeeeeee. Need an update pleeeeeese.It is a great story but gets depressing when you can not continue reading. Have enjoyed reading a lot. Thanks
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Me encanta este libro, simplemente lo que necesito y busco. Siempre busco libros de este tema y realmente me atrapa, no lo dejes caer autor este libro es muy muy bueno
to put it in a wierdo way yet one that is very commonI like how the mc is strong but still learningI don't like how he still hasn't mentioned that he knowskeep up the good work and I hope to read more about bears
Gramática de muy alto nivel para una novela sobre Qidian.Y no te tomes esas palabras a la ligera.Cuando estaba leyendo el primer capítulo, lo que mi mente notó fue lo suave que podía leer la novela incluso más que la historia en ese momento.ENTONCES me di cuenta de la historia. El autor obviamente tiene un plan para esto. Incluso fui a deviantart para ver más de cerca el mapa.Si esto da alguna pista, es que puede esperar una historia bien pensada y gramaticalmente buena con una construcción mundial expansiva en el futuro.Incluso considerando los pequeños agujeros de la trama, SÓLO la legibilidad de esta novela le da cinco estrellas. Sigue escribiendo mi hombre, y sigue haciéndolo durante mucho tiempo: D
Dropped novel. The translation quality was terrible and in the ~400 chapters there is a point where it feels like many chapters went missing as the story from one chapter to another makes no sense and the characters ends up in a weird situation out of nowhere with nothing related to the previous chapter point.
this is so wrong..y isnt good novel get good attention..??!!!y..??y..?y..i badly need new novel with new genre..recently webnovel keep pushing that so called stupid FL and richess ML and i am damn so tired of it..i do like FL lead novels..but not same plot all over again..n.. A VERY BIG THANKS TO U FOR THIS NOVEL..!!!n what important is..it keep making u want to read more..p/s: bout the shameless..dont be..shy peoples wont go anywhere..be bold..
The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .
A very good read. Among the usual trial read that we are getting, this is like a diamond. I would not say much, just read it.Psst.. There are only 30 chapters for now. And I am reading mtl now so to ease my pain i deducted the .2 in review.?