"OWEN WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU DO TO IT?? DID YOU MAKE IT A FUCKING EUNUCH OR WHAT?!"
It’s a story about a misogynist in a misandrist world. BUt there’s hardly any difference in this world and any other generic plain medieval world on this platform. There are a lot of other minor things that bothered me enough to drop it without reading to full but I’ll mention the most glaring. The mc is supposed to be super smart but the author can’t write him smart. So they made others stupid. He will mention the most obvious common sense stuff and then say others were blown away by his intelligence. He’s basically the one eyed king in the land of blind.The world is misandrist but there’s hardly anything mentioned about it. (Except maybe male red light districts. If it even counts as one.) And the repeated (and frankly stupid in this kind of story based novel) trope about mc ”conquering” women to the point of belief reversal with his tool. Anyway I’ve avoided spoilers (I think). This was not for me. Though author’s grammar is fine(which is a prize here), the writing itself can be improved.
Has the making to be better than JoJo. I can't wait for comic panels to come out for this story. Very enjoyable and likable characters.
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from what I have read so far it is a good read can't wait to see were it goes
This is a good story. I didn't often read novels about apocalypse but this one is interesting and so is the main character and how will he save his planet. It only needs proofreading in some chapters then it will turn to a more improved version of the story. This is still new and I think the author will still improve with this one. Good luck author!
i all about romance but I decided to give this book a chance. Okay, what got my attention was the book cover and I proceeded to the synopsis and I told myself. I must read this. Sincerely, the book didn't disappoint me which excite me a lot. A great piece of work and looking forward to more chapters!
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author here guys Im sorry Ive been really busy for awhile this novel is not on hold I'm going to try and update frequently these next couple days to get my novel more chapters
uhg my heart this book is just far too cute. Its so cute and cheesy i might as well be eating a block of gouda!!!?????? Their dinamic is so sweet and i just cant wait for them to be actually together ❤. Rhis book is going to make me catch diabetes i swear. Ig my heart ❤
nice work dear keep it up, nice and very wonderful story
It's such a great novel! The story is just unpredictable! You just can't guess what will happen next. Enjoyed reading it so much and it just goes to how underrated this is.