Writing is smooth with little to no grammer mistakes that caught my attention.Characters are nice but i feel like they crush on him really easily probably there are other reasons for that will be revealed later but still there couldve been more interaction between them before at least they realize they are smitten by him.Other than that i feel like pace is good with captivating writing style keep up the good work.
Good grammar, a rather interesting premise and an atypical power system and a world that is in the same vein, not much else to say, it's a solid read.
????????????????????? I prefer this book a lot? just want more updates.
Really wierd how other people can match or even surpass the growth of mc. I’m not talking about strength but with resources and facilities especially in the early stages.
Hello, once again author kun, just wondering if this is going on hiatus or smtg? cus you said it was only a three day break but it's already been 5...
Not a bad of a Description and I hope the novel will be really great and interesting ???????????????????????????????????
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it's fun to read, it doesn't feel rushed, the translation is good, the main character isn't boring or beta. in general it's a good fanfic, I'm just afraid of the frequency of posting the chapters.
This is horrible Trash.All the 5 Stars are from Idiots.??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
the first chapter of this novel was really good and before I knew it the mc starts to act like a clown, most of the the time he thinks outloud or the chatting with his enemies like the bandits the goblin. and for someone who couldn't socialize with people to change so drastically. honestly I only got problems with the mc he's to childish, when will he get seriuos?? is it when he loses someone important?? .wel the story it self isn't bad if guys want read it give it a try then.
Is there a summary of the novel or just things happen (, things happen) ........................................................................
It makes me sad there are "not enough ratings" if its a fucking 5.0 rating.So pls let it showcase how good it is....................................