Its really good for your first original novel!
i was waiting for this book! wishing all the best author!
The story is interesting but I think the author spent too much time trying to separate Jasmine and Tristan rather than on the marriage itself. There are too many chapters where people are scheming against them
I completely agree with Legendoras; everything he mentioned is spot on.
In my opinion, this novel had potential and all the elements needed to be a great story, but unfortunately, it was poorly executed.
The main character’s cheat is ridiculous. He can essentially acquire any skill and elevate it to divine level with minimal effort. The progression from basic to medium, then to advanced, and finally to divine level (and possibly one more tier) is overly powerful. It’s easy to imagine that once cultivation becomes a factor (perhaps around chapter 3000), he’ll be able to do the same with his cultivation levels, which feels extremely overpowered.
The pacing is excruciatingly slow. Dozens of chapters are dedicated to a single day or event, which in a well-paced novel like "I Became the Rich Second-Generation Villain," would cover an entire arc. This makes the story feel unrealistic, as many significant events occur within a short timeframe. The author could have spread these events over months to make the character development of the heroines more believable. Additionally, the ages of the young heroines seem off; they act like children under 10 years old, yet they are supposedly 18. It would have been more logical to set their ages at 12-14, especially since the protagonist also pursues one of their mothers.
Another frustrating aspect is the censorship. The author seems to aim for a broad audience, but this leads to unreasonable justifications, such as the age discrepancies. Sometimes, the author tries to create hot ecchi scenes, but they fall flat due to excessive censorship, making it feel like reading a novel through a mosaic filter. Other times, it leaves you feeling unsatisfied.
, this is a poorly executed and annoying novel. It feels like a low-grade version of "I Became the Rich Second-Generation Villain." The protagonist doesn’t come across as a villain at all; he seems more like a typical protagonist.
I strongly recommend dropping this novel and picking up "I Became the Rich Second-Generation Villain" instead. If you’ve already read "I Became the Rich Second-Generation Villain," there’s nothing in this novel that offers a better experience. Just skip it.
Disclaimers: This is a review of the web novel, so differences may exist compared to light novels (LN) or manga adaptations. The title of the series is indeed rather generic, as expected, but the concept intrigued me. It stands out from other ill-defined isekai stories because it has a clear purpose.
The protagonist isn't your typical overpowered isekai hero; he's actually weaker than many foes, and far from being the main antagonist. Throughout the story, he faces significant challenges and gets defeated often, even later on. His character is decent, not extraordinary, but not as one-dimensional as typical OP protagonists – a welcomed change.
While the pace might be slow for some readers, the series maintains its focus and direction, even if occasional fillers are present. The best part is that it's not a harem; there's only one female lead, which adds a fresh dynamic. The relationship between Tia and the MC is charming, though the author seems to either shy away from romance or lacks experience in that area. However, their connection does evolve.
In terms of storytelling, this series is superior to most rushed isekai titles that run out of ideas. It's an adventure with unexpected twists, engaging plot developments, and a deepening narrative as the duo explores 100 diverse worlds. Each world offers unique characteristics, making interactions with their inhabitants compelling.
Overall, the story is intriguing, and the original premise is well-executed. It's a standout among isekai web novels. The only drawbacks are the slow pace and the author's reluctance to explore romance despite its potential.
Title: Unexpected Delight - A Book Review
After finally completing the book, I felt compelled to share my updated thoughts. Initially, I had a lukewarm impression, particularly towards the main targets, with Su Shi being the exception. However, the female lead, Bai Xia, stole the show for me.
The story follows Bai Xia as she meticulously plans to win the hearts of seven men and one woman, all in her quest to return home. Her attention to detail is impressive – every aspect of her plan is thought through. What initially seemed like a clichéd villain turned out to be a captivating character, and I found myself thoroughly enjoying her cunning tactics. Each male character had distinct personalities, making them memorable.
The author truly excelled in crafting diverse and engaging characters. While the reverse harem genre might appeal to some, it wasn't quite my cup of tea. Initially, I would have rated it two stars, but Bai Xia's competence and skill set elevated my opinion. For that reason, I'm giving it three stars instead, acknowledging the strength of the protagonist's portrayal.
I want to wait until the book is finished. I hope my life is enough.
they dont, but weird people do be doing weird things in a daily basys, the moment someone start thinking that pineaple on pizza is a good thing they are already a lost case, if they decide to put anything else i wont be surprised
About the 85th chapter
Thank you for telling me
Please don't stop updating author...I need need an ending please
*spreads hands* ┐(‘～`;)┌