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I have never heard of a book like this before! This teenage girl is so dedicated to her foster brothers and sisters that she's willing to do anything for them to make sure that they have everything that they need, and she's just a kid herself. She's finally found a guy who seems to recognize how special she is, but will they make it work? I keep reading chapters to find out. Can't wait for more to be released!
Disclaimer i havent read this novel yet and simply giving 5 stars because the title of this novel is just too good “hopeful Homicide” can you get better than that on this app?
Hello, this is my first Fanfiction! I was very bored and have never done this so thank you so much for reading, and let me know what you like and dislike! Thank you for your time!
Overall, it is pretty meh. He has a somewhat overpowered ability and he seems to still get the luckiest skill pickups possible. The translation of the names are terrible. If you can't come up with good western names at the very least just leave them as Chinese.
Awesome story!!I don't normally give 5 stars because even in some fairly well written stories, my bloody persnickety brain notices the flaws, and throws me out of my immersion in the story. While this story isn't perfect, it's well enough written and so enjoyable that the odd small flaw doesn't break the immersion. It's a delight.The dialog is witty and that's because even the other characters, both in and out of the game, are believably vivid and interesting, let alone the MC.It uses a classic web novel trope, the respawn, without treating it like a trope. The MC is affected by his death, and past, unlike the typical, "Oh well, that happened. Let's have a good life this time!" reaction you see so often, as if years of life, conflict and death have no impact on the psyche. It also doesn't follow the standard "I will save the world" or "I must become powerful and/or rich" (in either world) plot this time around, despite the MC being weak in his first life. He was weak, but there isn't the bullying, abuse, betrayal by half-brother, fiancee, best friend, step-mother, classmates, etc.. you see in respawn stories.Too often in a VRMMORPG game novel, after a while, either the game or real life (typically real life) starts to feel either boring, just for word count, or skimping on anything interesting or meaningful. That is not happening in this story, and there are enough plot lines going on that it does not seem likely. As others have said, this is a well thought out story.Well done! I am totally looking forward to more chapters. I'm even going to read the Jim Daoran's other book, The Slime Farmer, even though I don't like slimes and typically ignore such books, because this author has given me reason to think that he can write an enjoyable story, even with slimes involved. (Don't hate on me about slimes, we all have our likes and dislikes. ;-)
I like the MC desire to fight against all odds for the a destiny that's rightfully his. GD
On a un héros qui est déjà cheaté qui devient encore plus cheater avec des statistiques ou des objets sans intérêt pour lui et en plus tout le monde l'aime c'est ridicule et en plus pour ce qui est intéressant les combats avec les méchants c'est zapper autrement dit on passe notre temps à le voir graine des pouvoirs et des Pokémon en plus franchement on dirait que l'auteur a plus envie de ne pas aller les compétences que d'écrire l'histoire. Je suis très déçu et je vais pas continuer je m'arrête au chapitre 12
Goddamit... Webnovel delete "I'm the MC, Why Do I Suck at Cultivation" for this bullsh*t??? hope someone translate that novel..Goddamit... Webnovel delete "I'm the MC, Why Do I Suck at Cultivation" for this bullsh*t??? hope someone translate that novel..
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This story is very well-crafted. It's pretty obvious the writer takes care in writing to make the reader well-versed in it. There are small grammar problems but they don't affect the incredible writing you'll go through reading.
I use to love this novel but the new updated version completely destroyed it... Author fix this bull**** please. .......................................................
Ada N.B di akhir sino**is tentang kepenulisan yang kurang bagus. Oke ... aku sudah memaklumi dari awal membaca chapter satu. Akan tetapi, bukankah lebih baik belajar pelan-pelan sambil tetap menulis novel? Jadi, suatu saat setelah novelmu tamat, kamu bisa revisi lagi. Perbaiki apa yang kurang seperti tanda baca dan PUEBI.Btw, aku suka nama setiap karakternya memakai nama lokal. Semangat berkarya! ? ??
