What's with this novel about???????????????
I like how the story unfolds so far, although it has a haren label, I find it difficult for him to take another woman, it shows that he loves this woman very much...
Great start. I love books that begin with broken trust, anger or hatred. The fact that it's a feeling of betrayal somewhat by his sister and father makes it even better. So excited to read this book to the end to know what transpires amongst the blooded trio...
Great book but small question. I've just passed ch 50 and it was said before that he could fight six major realms ahead. yet he struggles to kill people who can only fight 6-8 minor levels. how so?
Review Shark does not find it worth your time, would rather read machine translated of other novels nothing to sustain my attention ....454565
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the story itself is good, the pacing is just slow. it reminds me of Fey Evolution Merchant a lot. it has references that made me think of FEM like the floating city in the back of the whale, definitely want this to be picked.
overall it seems like a promising novel to read. the author needs to get a editor or write this in grammarly or something cause the grammar gives me a stroke.
This story is really good. I liked the anonymity each character had, and the pacing was good as well. The characters are all different and well thought out and the settings are crafted well. Overall, I’m really enjoying it. :D
So, the “stuck in game” plot has been done so many times that I can’t even count, but this is still such a good read! The beast taming and the game mechanics all work together. It’s just great.Author-sama! Keep it up, fighting!
Weird ... is an understatement , it does seem to play on the ,,shadow army´´ card ,in a different way then other novels - alright . But around 10 ch , it falls back to stupid cliche , with mc needing to depend on something ( although he seems to be in the best possition to be in - owning an entire guild on his own) . The character background - non-existent - or rather there is one - but its simply .. badOrphan, poor, unsupported and shown that he has a "bad" talent ,right to be shownt wrong .Im gonna act like i didnt see the -seemingly narciss thing from first chapters , thats weird author :-) dont like it , not gonna read anymore , and to anyone reading this - dont aswell - there are better things to waste time reading
This review is based until chapter 70.The story is really slow. the grammar is ok except the author doesn’t know how to use the correct pronoun. he keeps on using ‘they’ or ‘their’ when he’s only referring to a single person. this usually confuse me because i always thought that he was talking about a group of people. He also keeps on referring to other chars as noble this noble that, half elf this half elf that. It should be a name in order for us to remember who is who. for me there’s a lot of filler chapters in here. the mc seems to be like a minOr char here. tImothy seems to be the mc here. i dont know.