So, from the first 5 chapters I have read till now, I have felt the following opinions:1) I could immediately find and relate to the storyline2) The mc has gained some depth to his character already3) Some words need to be changed to make it better sounding. I lost my immersion into the story a few times when certain words couldn't bring out the intended effect4) The mental state of the mc has not been fixed. It's like he can read too much into a situation, trust others easily ( I'm not sure about this point, but something about the MC's behavior put me off a bit)5) but the story is quite immersive, it may not seem like a unique plot but it sure is interesting to read. I'm completely hooked up to the plot. ???
I absolutely love this story and everything about it
1. this book is murdering the english language2. interesting characters at first, but no development3. we are just dropped into a world, there's no information4. the story is not badconclusion: it is readable and zan be a good book, if you have free time and nothing to read, but to absolutely say that you have to read this book I wouldn't go that far.
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This story is, in my opinion fantastic! The quality of writing and the release schedule are nice and plot has bren going at a good pace, I hope to read more of the story soon.
This is a story about a boy who gets horny and lustful of his sister, where conflict arises for seemingly random reasons that wouldn't arise if you behaved like a human being. Ex; mc gets stabbed by a henchman because he was earning the bonus money that the person who hired the henchman would originally receive. Mc is constantly being belittled by others, it like it is PMG (Peerless Martial God) all over again.
Almost 5 stars for me, the only thing I hate is the update speed 1 ch/week that's too long.At the moment : 76 chapters. I like the mc willingness to die and use his cheat how he cheese the hell out of it, others won't use that cheat to keep it a secret.The story has A LOT of potential, Spoiler " the mc is building his base and dungeon, starting to build up his own army and " farming" resources.
Totally my style!There aren't that many original novels that include entertainment and a system like yours and mine.I've got to say, it's very interesting.It kinda makes me want to start publishing again..Keep up the good work!
The author is a Cuckold and wrote this for other Cuckolds. It would be cool if the systems were normal, and the plot was thought out, but alas, this work has a stupid level on the level of cringe, the author’s perverted ideas. Normal people won't like it in principle.
The shameless pervert is honest.The writing quality is a 3.5/5 for me. The author uses “my” when “mine” should be used. “She is mine” or “she will be mine” not “she is my.” The sentences sometimes are missing words and definite/indefinite articles.There’s a steady updating, so 5/5!The story creeps up like a man in yobai but premature *ahem* ruins it sometimes. 4/5, the immaturity and virgin part is essential to the story, but it’s not my cup of tea.3.5/5 for characters as I don’t understand how his perversions are indulged by other characters, but then again, what do I know?3/5 for world building. It’s pretty generic to me, but if you think otherwise, write your own d*mn review!
Another question would be why is this still on trial read instead of good novels like ancestor above or dragon tamer fjfjfkfkfkfkfkffjfkfkff
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