As a fellow Alternate History writer, I give it a solid 5 star review.
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i can be a good novel.....honestly i didn't get it now WN is only using MTL and it is so difficult to understand what is going on specially in stories like this......i felt like i lost the story around ch 7 or 8
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Rika this is amazing continue with the good work! I like it and I also voted for you! I don’t even know why I’m using grammar tbh lol but honestly it’s good.
The only thing that's worse than joining Arsenal is Newcastle. but not by much, having said that good story, even if the kids a Gunner, better that thqn a Magpie
The story " Golden Hotel" is a story, which i literally love and i suppose anyone who would read it will love it. I really want to who is behind all the murders , the way in which everything is described including the way the games are played is really nice. And i like Faith and Hans and i don't want them to die.
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I gotta say I'm obsessed with this story?Well the writing of the author...of my god, it's awesome like the world background, the characters, and the writing quality...the word perfect isn't enough to descript it.Well, the first chapter is so interesting with the flow of the story and the mc's family background.Should read this one!! 10/10
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Writing Quality: 5☆I don't count bad english or typos in these kind of reviews as they don't change the story, can always be edited and judging the authors english over small things like that is just unreasonable.Story Development: 5☆Even before any real big story development is made you can sometimes tell that it is good, and this is the case here too.If in these 12 chapters there would have been a big change, it would have already been bad in stories like this, so it is already good that, while you can already look in the future a little in the first chapter, there is no big change yet.The 'introduction chapter' tells you that in the next chapter from now there will definitely be some development in the next chapter.In other words, the pace of the story is well done.Character Design: 5☆Not much to say.In chapter 3 or 4 (I don't quite remember) we will be introduced to Ayane and we can already tell that she has a very special character and a very elaborate character design.Following that we get a glimpse of the reason for mc's attitude, which already hint on great character design for him.Later on in chapter 11 if I remember correctly, we get introduced to a student called Dracula as her surname. We also get a little explaination about the name and have a moment with her.While it was only speculation, I have made a comment at the end of the chapter that I have put my thoughts about her character in, and the fact that I was able to think of so many things already shows that she most likely also has a pretty special character on top of the bit that we already know.Somewhere we get a flashback to the prophecy and can see that even almost irrelevant background characters, such as the sage, don't lack personality, which is something I have only seen in 1 other novel for a just one character to be frank. If rating this 6☆ would be an option, I would choose it. Respect +1, sir author!Updating Stability: 4☆My sense of time us very bad, but (correct me if I'm wrong) I am pretty sure that, even tho we got daily chapter (I think at least...), the time in which they get uploaded isn't uniform.World Backround: 5☆Thank the god of fate, WE FINALLY GOT SOMETHING NEW AND AT LEAST A LITTLE ORIGINAL!!!