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Very entertaining and amazing world building from the start
I must say, this book is one of the best works of its kind I have ever encountered. Many that deal with mazes and dungeons don't do world history as well as this book, and this one also has characters with real personalities that show real growth and it makes me really anxious to read more and more about what might happen next. Congratulations and thanks for the good work!
This webnovel is one of the best I've ever read from the world building to the characters o love everything about it plus I can really feel the love between el and lucy
overall decent but needs patience as it is a bit of a slow burner. nice work author, i can tell you put a lot of effort into it. the pacing is a bit slow to my liking, a lot of dialogue and internal confusion going on, but the writing is good and up to chapter three i was entertained. would recommend!
honestly? this is so good, it's such a wholesome read, it's so entertaining that I'm here everyday lol. maybe because the chapters are short for now in the email penpals stage, or because I'm just loving both A and P, and because I'd totally fall for A because he's what I want in a guy. it's wholesome and I can't wait for more. I'm loving it ??
So there aren't that much chapter yet but What I read it is amazing! I really love the plotline and hope that it continuous the in upcoming chapter .It's definitely worth reading.
Is this a shameless author review? Yes. But, trust me when I say that this novel is 100% worth your time if you like fresh ideas! I'm not super experienced as an author, but I want to improve and develop to make this an amazing story.
The story had a very good start, there were some chapters which had me worried for the development of the stories, like in first town and casual day. I wont comment on grammar as i focus more on other aspects of story. the author already laid a groundwork for a good world so he should keep in mind of that. I would remind the author not to go in the direction of know it all and clever type MC without laying groundwork to make believe. If harem or romance then should have a good development like in some love at first sight. The villains and competitors should also not be some fools and should have some character. The author should not be discouraged by some comments but rather strive to improve his quality, I believe this story has a chance for good development.
Have you ever met a person who makes you feel stupider while just listening to them? The main character of this novel is even worse than that, and you just feel stupider reading about him. It's so bad that when something happens in the book, you can think about stupidest thing you could ever think about doing in that situation, and the MC will do something stupider then that.
Hello there author! I hope I'm not bothering too much with this review. I felt the need to write because I haven't seen any updates to this novel for 3 months. It's one of my favorites, right on the 2nd place and I'd like to see it continue. I saw that the other novel was updated and I thought that maybe you have some free time to write about this one as well? I know your situation, I hope to receive an answer as long as it takes until you update this novel. A wonderful novella, please keep writing!
Our Mc is the weakest type of immortal. His goal is to be the greatest smuggler in the immortal world smuggling items from the world. The plot is decent with comedy undertones. Although the female stereotype.......cliche.