5 stars because unbeelievable for slowing us to make a good bee good novelf I'm bad at puns good novel tho :)
Forever and always. This is the best webnovel I have ever read. I can't help but fall in love with the characters, their traits, their stories, their uniqueness and yes even their shamelessness. To the author and translators, I salute you for a job very well done. Thank you.
I have started binge reading this so I can't say much about the updates just 3/week seems a bit little, but in exchange for the lower frequency we get a really good quality. The MC is not stupidly OP after reincarnating - it shows he still has weaknesses. Some might say certain situations are unrealistic, but if you take in account what happens right before the MC reincarnates I think it is good writing that the MC sometimes does things cause he loses control of his emotions.
Author Note: I am writing as a hobby but I tried to do things professionally. Although I need to work on my grammar more, my story is still readable and written in detail. I rate my review Writing Quality 3 stars because it is only average writing quality with quite a lot grammar mistakes. However, if I'm a person that just curing from dyslexia could read the novel without much difficulty, I'm sure other won't have it hard to read the story either.My grammar needs improvement but I don’t have a teacher to teach me, so I don’t mind it if you rate me badly because of my grammar since I understand that it’s important for the reader to read the novel. Just don’t expect for it to get any better if you don’t plan on helping me. Like I say, I don’t have a teacher to teach me grammar. I couldn’t see the mistake when I’m writing and re-reading so, you cannot hope for too much. Stability of Updates, I must rate it 5 stars because 1 chapter a day and if there are a lot chapters in stock I will update 2-5 chapter on Sunday or sometimes on Saturday too. Its depend on my mood, really but it can never be lower than one chapter a day. So, I must say that it is as stable as translator translating an available novel.Story Development 4 stars. Don't ask me why. I just liked how my story is developing. Why it lack one more star? Because it is not quite detail enough unlike professional novels.Character design 4 stars. I love my characters, naturally 4 stars. Why it lack one more star? Similar to the above, it is not quite detail enough but in the future, I will improve on this surely.World Background 4 Stars. No reason, just 4 stars.Source of inspiration: Library of Heaven Path, History's Number 1 Founder, Tales of Demons and GodsDisclaimer: I don't have the basic knowledge of Xianxia so do forgive me for that. I only know Xianxia from reading novels so my knowledge can be lacking. However, it is a certain that this novel is more of Xuanhuan than Xianxia. That novel cover, I owned it. I'm the one that created it.Warning: It is Yaoi. If you don’t like Yaoi, you can still read because I think that some Xianxia and Xuanhuan have acceptable BL moment too. If there is NSFW scene I will warn beforehand. There will be a rate for Yaoi moment. One star to five stars. If it is too explicit, I will rate it five stars, if it just both men being naked but did nothing, I will rate it one star. If you hate Yaoi, then please, I’m politely escorting you out of my novel. Don’t ruin the review just because you hate Yaoi.You may ask whatever you want to ask in this review but make sure to be polite to everyone.
Haven’t even read it yet but you had me when you said that the mc won’t turn into a murderous cunt for revenge I gotta admit that made me laugh pretty good
A Great Book , there is a lot of character introduction and good world background . Different types of knowledge are also specialised. Overall a great Novel
not good enough, it just wasted my time, the volume 3 was a mess instead of advancing the author nerfed the mc, worst of all I got baited and read the summoning part, it was the worst change of plot ever, what benefits did he get there? none instead his cultivation was reset, that was the worst thing I've ever read, pure waste of time, I'm speechless how I stay overnight for this for whole 2 days.
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Nice story with a stable character, little to no grammatical errors as of now waiting to see how it goes, Hmm, don't know abt how the update goes will wait before commenting.
This is were it was originally posted https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/rwby-the-gamer-the-games-we-play.306381/Lord-panda stole this from Ryuugi, he is not the writer.
in my personal opinion, this is a novel with out a reliable store. and go nowhere.please webnovel bring at least 1 novel of the grupe every friday with at list good and interesting story.a story with transmigrated, and a system, and that he can summons.something like the: The Elemental Tower, Lord of the Oasis,Astral Pet Store, Summoning the Holy Sword, Summoning Total War.and the no. 1 novel today out there the "Monster Paradise"thank you webnovel even if you will not want to. here is the best site to read good novels :)
A lot of cliches and nonsense. dieing sister, “fixes” a vr helmet ( if you can do that why dont you have a job?), gets a talent to create pets in the vr game( the one good point is i havent seen this exact power ) and proceeded to act like a normal Chinese mc in anyother story. There is little development (other then what the author adds in without much support or thought) and honestly i dislike the mc for some reason