It looked like Fran only paid attention to the last thing she said, though it was actually just Rose teasing her.
For anyone reading this: I am trting , and want to release a chapter a week, but I have terrible time management, and constant idea changes.Bear with me as I try to improce not only me writing, but myself as well.
As if she was possessed. She wasn't being herself.
Liam "to be calm and not to be too energetic" said in a sad voice the women pulling his ray is his wife Carla.
it was no joke
Shang'a:ok just wait a bit goonna find you soon
you die, get reborn, want to just be some guy. Enjoy childhood again. Might as well.
Suddenly, the scenery changed and Leo found himself in an open land.
A very fun read. Fun enough that I can gloss over the fact that every time a word should be translated as now with the connotation of (present, right away, happening right now) it is translated as not with the meaning or connotation of (opposite, impossible, not happening right now).This isn't confusing in this novel like it is in others because Not is never used correctly and now never comes up. Just read each Not as Now and it all makes sense.Spell check was used, at least in the earlier chapters. But it didn't fix any incorrect word replacement errors. The smarter auto-correct gets, the more evil the incorrect words become when it fixes things to be wrong. This whole book needs edited by a human.
No joke. This novel is so good The world building is amazing. The dungeon creating is amazing. 10/10
Clicked the "Nonsense" Tag on a Fanfiction and found this riveting novel, an amazing story with suspense, thrill and mostly just nonsense! I love it! Hahah. Keep up the writing my friend. This gave me a good chuckle during a morning I didn't really want to wake up into. Now... Off to work.
I love how the author made the flow of the story, I've learned some things because in some situation I can relate it in my life. There's some part that I didn't expect the flow of story, that's why my mind is full of excitement . Good job for the author, I'm still waiting for the next chapter!