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This story is such a breath of fresh air in this godforsaken app. The author has done a great job so far in balancing, keeping a quality narrative going while applying some smut scenes here and there to spice things up a a bit. I recommend this to anyone who likes a mature eastern fantasy.
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Writing - readable 5 ⭐story - first i don't like the way the mc not take credit for himself and hide his talent i mean i could understand about hiding his realm or power but hiding his talent for what? if the elders got suspicious about him and check his body secret, can they find the system? sigh.. 3 ⭐character - i don't like mc discredit himself can't he just said he just have high comprehension like that? or his talent got boosted or say to elder that he want to re-asses his talent something like that? 4 ⭐update - 5 ⭐world - lack of details 4 ⭐i dont want to say anything morethank for the novel author ?
Welp I only read 5 chapters and it was kinda boring and confusing.The world take place in a modern world where dimensional rifts will appear, basically a portal where monsters will invade the world from.There are multiple grades from G and lower to F and higher (From what I read)Of course mankind can defend against them due people awakening powers. And it seems the mc has awakened clairoyance (Don't if I spelled it right) a long time ago and he is also likes money a lot (The execution is very bad tho)His parents died leaving him with only a sister who is 19 years old.Translation Quality: 3* (3* will be the standard now - sad)SoU: 3* (Each passing year it will only get worse)Story Development: 3* (Although only read 5 chapters, I see no direction)Character Design: 3* (Idk)World Background: 3* (Idk)
20 chapters in so far so good just hope he doesn't become a simp but there is a high probability that he will be a simp with all those female characters they are introducing
This is some peak writing. The MC gets a system but it doesn't become a cheat. By training and learning the mc can slowly get better and activate skills for activities. The story is well done and the villains are decent as well. I wish this had gotten selected. Please come back, Author! (4th time reading through).
As a medical student I can say that this novel is very good and has accurate medical terminology and elements so far. Yes, it is medicine orientated, there are many special terms (medical jargons) used all over the place. So far it it heavily surgery based but I can see that he may cover many other fields in the future. This novel is a blessing for me!? So interesting to read...
... I have been harping about a reverse gender role of the typical cliche FL face slapping type stories.... Have I found it??! Going to give this a try and return with a review at a later date.
The main character gets seven wishes in chapter 1 and there are grammar mistakes all over the place and in some parts of the story the grammar is so bad it's unreadable. I also didn't make it past chapter 1. I also find it weird that there are no other reviews mentioning this. so in my opinion it's probably the other reviews are either fake or the people who wrote them are so in love with the idea of this story they can't see how badly it's written and then there's the possibility they're just trying to be nice.
finally i can see a new chapter I've been waiting for so long about 2 years i think on tap read seeing that this was drop made me really happy ?????
