I enjoy this so far as I have always loved mage builds. But if this is going to be a P-A-T-R-E-O-N exclusive you should post this on scribblehub and royalroad.
Wish this gets picked. .
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Your story is nice. The Building of it is nice. I hope the author can continue his work more and make his dream successful. I again say, the story is good. May the stars align for him.
For now well executed but watch out cuz it should continue. Hopefully you don't drown in making the mc too cringey with drunk humour. Too much ain't good but I see none for now. I like the idea of a drunken immortal(I always wanted to read more about an oddball wandering, mysterious mc). Finally the make or break moment for me. Is this harem or otp? or no romance?What ever the case good luck with your story.
this a utterly super posionus garbage ?️ 1 doesn't follow even the basic logics like every action has a equal and opposite reaction 2 writer is writing a novel everything centred around human body yet doesn't know jacksh it about human body 3 super in consistent like says something in one para yet a para below say the totally opposite 4 everything is just super vague last this not a novelthis is more the first most draft of a novel where everything is vague with ton618 size plot holes written as timeline reference for the proper novel this enough to say how trash this isadvice either don't read this trash or shutdown the logical and rational thinking part of your brain before reading or else u might deplete all of your surviving brain cells
Good start Grammar MysterysPowers Characters At 60 Chaps to early to to recognize if it is a drag story or not.As usual first volume has no problems.
hey man did ya drop it and where can I find the mtl
great story,the bad things that I think should be improve in the story is the mc intelligence, not a smart in not to stupid mc but sometime mc don't think enough or analysis more in certain situation so more failure hope it get better in the way the story progress and my personal problem is now he got a guide and there interaction in mc being dumb and I hate that, as a reader I want the mc to be smarter or use some thinking when he is talking to other people.
can you please continue, this idea is relly good.
If you like laid back cultivation stories where MC already had a high start and just teaching some disciples then this is for you. It's something I would read if I want to relax and chill. Hope this gets more attention keep it up author!
Story was good until it turned into the typical mc who only saves girls and get angry over his own people trying to kill a girl that would have killed all of them if she have the power. Overalll you will just keep getting angry reading this. It’s a good novel but I won’t recommend it