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Is this number one in the power ranking today? I am definitely not suspicious of it. Definitely not seen this happening back then. Especially when the story is kind of hmm? I don't know how to describe it. It is so bland and the story is very predictable.LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
After reading 130+ chapters (thanks for the raws) here's what I can say.In my opinion, people are exaggerating about the patriotism in the novel. MC cares about his family+girl above everything, but also wants to help his country whenever possible. Why? He literally lived through the destruction and massacre of his country's population. It would be rare if that didn't affect him. In fact, I could even say he is selfish. He doesn't help others out of patriotism, he does it because he wants to form his own team to fight demons. He's trying to save the world on his own terms. With that out of the way, it is very readable. MC is definitely OP since he has obtained multiple rewards that although separately are good, combined in the same person make him progress very quickly. However, this is somewhat balanced with the fact that demons are way stronger than humans. As a result, he keeps having to fight enemies quite above his level. Anyways, I suggest you don't let comments about racism/nationalism dissuade you, it's not as bad as some are making out to be.
Well, it is a rather good story, at least I think of it as interesting. It has some flaws here and there, but it could still be an enjoyable reading experience... only if the translation would not s**k so much! For gods sake, it is clear, that a machine was used for morst of the translation, fine. Ther eis worse than doing it like that... But at least go over the translation and try to fix obvious mistakes like gender-swapping or changing translations for the same thing (at least I only noticed two instances, where names were switched out from a desribing name to a chinese romantication of it).Over all the translating becomes more and more sloppy with the later chapters and mistakes are continously draged on (nearly a running-gag is, that two ranks of troop-levels are translated the same...)And yes, one can read the english in a fluent way - the sentencens are legal and rightfull english (most of the time) - that is a given, but come on! We are PAYING for these chapters and even then there are Chapters that are doubled or right out missing? Not to mention some ideoms I can not get about "bull nose"s....It would also not hurt, if the translator would be interested enough to read the story he/she/it translates, so that very heavy mistakes like the translation of the ranks would be noticed and can be corrected - EVEN IF the original did make a mistake there, it could be corrected, as long as it does not change the setting or consequent story. I mean even the readers are continously marking these mistkaes, but nobody corrects them... that is sad for a paid work, but not unusal on webnovel...However, in a novel revolving around romance, and interaction between characters as the main point, I can tollerate it more to be a bit sloppy... Who cares in an action-game if there are a few mistakes in the backround info about the troops or the ressources? They do not matter. In a strategie-game however - and this novel is a strategie-game becoming a novel - that is a no go! It ruins immersion and you stop caring about these infos, even though they apear quite frequently... Not to mention, that because of missing chapters we are missing some character-sheets and skill-descriptions - or at least I assume that, since they are not here at least. If they are already missing in the original_ BAD author, be ashamed and sit in the corner!
when i read the reviews i honestly felt like i probably wouldn't like this novel but this novel, However i was pleasantly surprised by how much i've enjoyed it. The main character is likeable and has a visible depth and as the novel progresses his growth is obvious to the reader. There is intrigue, there is sex, there is drama. Everything is in this novel, and everything is well thought out and planned and any issues that are in the novel the author is very interactive and discusses them and remedies if need be. And tbh i cant really find any fault apart from minor grammar issues. And for all those who are wondering, NO. There is no NTR and should read the novel and see for yourself.
it's a great read and we need more chapters per update
looking forward more chapters everyday. the flow of the story is getting more interesting . I like Marshall's character, Hoping he will end up wth Stella.
Awesome .... I know reading a book is much more pleasurable than watching a movie as u get to imagine things exactly the way u want it. it's mesmerizing. keep the good work going.
it was so good
Worst!!!!! They only post 1 chapter a day and most times they don’t even post one!!! Useless author can’t keep their fans happy
Love it just wished the author would write more chapters. Lol. Anxious to see if Angeline and Jay get back together with their three children. I love happy endings
new chapters pleade