This story is amazing and engaging and I frankly couldn’t put it down and still want more... I’d recommend this to anyone looking for a story with great characters good action some drama not too much and an MC that kicks ass
I can't describe how much this novel it's good. Obviously you can't actually take my word because I'm make the revision of this novel with insane amounts of mistakes that some I can't even see. I'm actually just waiting for me to reach 140.......................
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The theme of cultivation being a side concept for the 'BL' world is an interesting find, and I think the novel will rake in the views and attention it deserves if the prioritization remains that way (so that cultivation doesn't waylay the BL romance)!Overall, the story is great. A characters possess the proper generic attributes dependent on their origin or race - humans possess clear, intrinsic or external flaws, similar to how spirits and demon characters have specific weaknesses or strengths. This is being portrayed nicely in the first four chapters, and outshines a good chunk of what you can find in Webnovel's archives.The only thing I would suggest during later revision is to check whether the tense is appropriate for smooth transitions between instances and actions. From my opinion, the wording scheme can be altered between instances from past to present instead of strictly adhering to a single attribute to add variety, but the method you employed worked as well!Good Work! This is definitely going into the library of someone who doesn't read BL novels!
So far so good. Not some reincarnated character from another world with heaven defying knowledge at his advantage.. But I have some doubts about the Orb of Will thing, do they have to depend on it at all times? Why can't they just cultivate using the Spiritual Qi of Heaven and Earth? Anyway, I'm liking 'Soaring the Heavens' and more updates..
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Really loved it. Like the whole crime is everywhere setting and how the mc plats sorta of a antihero role and especially love the body modification. it would be cool if the next upgrade had something to do with Zach's defensive and give's him like something like titanskin or dragon/serpent scales that deflect knives and such which he can use to not have to use a poultice every he gets hurt or gives him away to attack without his tail like claws that he can use so people don't find out he's Demon. Personally I don't mind the writing but some people can be put off not read this fantastic story so fix it if you can if not I'll still keep reading because this is one of the few books on this site that I enjoy reading.
Well it was good in my opinion i like the book cover and the story was just goof i would recommend it to anyone around the age of 13 through 16
Keep it up dude. Im really enjoying the book so far ??
Why did it stop? It was a story with so mutch potencial... did it get "transfer" to another website?Can someone pls tell me..................................................
Enjoy this novel so far. Funny players. interesting Monster beast and Undead . The plot is also good (for me) and i expect for more war scene .
I'm a simple guy; I see Piokilek as the author's name, I read it. But I don't think I will like any novel more than SC. That was the first novel I read on this site and what motivated me to write too.