this story is great my biggest problem with it is the author needs to get a good update schedual or atleast let us know if he has dropped the searies. I do not recommending getting started with it because of the bad upload schedule but if you don't care about being left in the middle of the story go for it
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This is a good read especially if you came for a laugh when cultivation and op mc is what you are looking for.I want to thank the author for sharing this good read with us readers and I hope he just continues making new chapters cause the story's concept is great.;)
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Honest ReviewFound this one has potential, feels a lot like Sword Art Online. (A very hard to read version of it.)The Good: Character classes are unique and it is nice to see an MC that isn't 100% righteous for once.The Bad: Hard to follow... it jumps around a lot with little to no indication. I found the world setting kind of convoluted and some of the situations to be pointless. It feels like a lot of this is filler content so far because I really only care about Shiro and people he interacts with.The Neutral: Objectively describing someone as "sexy" leaves it open to interpretation, that's not a bad thing by itself, but who thinks it is sexy? (i.e. the observers, the characters, the readers, NPCs?) Maybe I missed it, but why are they stuck in the world?Maybe add a note that senshi = warrior and the significance of it so people don't think "WTF are senshis? Sounds like sushi!" or something like that. (Assuming that is what you meant it to be)Feel free to review back and I'll add you on Line if you would like editing help.
Honestly, i thought the plot armor was not that big of a deal. I was wrong, terribly and extremely wrong. This is a force field of plot armor, it spread everywhere and affect everything. But if you can deal with it it become a funny story
A non-berserk berserker!? how incredibly rare! It's a pretty interesting story so far which is saying something because I'm not really into gaming novels. My only complaint is that we don't have games like this in real life.