Good for the time being will know more about in future chapter
Every thing is good except the way stretch a simple chapter into a complicated one.... bruh I got it that u want a goof world build, but it's just too much man u just gives info of 1 villain for 2 chapters n in third chapter he'll just die!! What is the freaking reason is there to give so much elaborate character, it's not even helping in world building, it just make it really boring, a simple 3 chapter arc is stretch out to 30 chapters just because of some nonsense, and what the freak is
DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DI E DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE 30X what is this bruh ... just fill up the pages u do this isn't is too greedy of you
the story is wholesome and full of mystery i guess or not. hahaha
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there's something wrong with MC brain in my opinion, his previous body owner dead because of murder, and after he gain system and small gain in cultivation he flaunt his beautiful mom, sister, maid around city. it's like asking for trouble. it's cliche story most protagonis donkey brain in novel and he doesn't realize he's source of trouble itself.
I like the idea of the story. Magic, urban setting, cultivation & romance. The MC is a turn off with his god complex. He looks down on everyone except his aunt. I haven’t gotten too far, but there are hints of possible ‘Bama action with the aunt & cousin, so I’m hesitant to get too far.I like he has his own mercenary team, he’s starting businesses and he has to work to get stronger even though he could be considered OP. I don’t like how he treats Amanda & the girls who like him. She does a lot for him but it’s obvious he has no feelings for her. He just needs to come right out & tell her & her sister that they will only be jump offs for him like he did with the celebrity women. I love romance in novels bc I feel it enhances the story. As of where I am, the romance tag is cap, but hopefully there is character development bc the writer is quite good at giving the reader an immersive experience.In conclusion take away the god complex & Arthur will become likeable. Other than that, I would recommend this novel ??
I am not really a fan of male pov books this is actually my first time and I woikd say it was quite an experience . it is an explosive journey through a tumultuous world. The author's vivid descriptions and well-crafted characters immerse you in a chaotic and unpredictable landscape. As the story unfolds, you'll find yourself on the edge of your seat, eager to uncover the next twist in this thrilling narrative. If you crave action and suspense this book won't disappoint.
The progression is super monotonous and distasteful. Everything goes according to the mc. There is no tension, no conflict , no arguments, no learning path. no challenges. Even if the MC is a reincarnation of an old guy with vast experience, you can make his speech, his thoughts clash with modern day rules and trends. His walk could have been made criticized. If everything goes right it stops being believable. Always try to retain small blemishes in character. It will bring more depth to character. Side characters come and go and everyone has the same relationship with MC. All the side characters only say the things that are necessary for the story to proceed . Nothing more , nothing less. They don't have any personal gimmicks, habits, features that can separate one another. In my mind all of them may look the same, it will not matter.The plot progression is so summary like that everytime I read a chapter I want to stop then and there.
Ayyyyy yes sir!! Pretty good so far, I love the amount of detail:)
when those god was introduced they started using these "HE" "HIM" "THEY" the f is that shdit just usef a facting regular he him they ,and also the regular earth will also get involved just like same with other same genre
Interesting read but the MC seems to know everything as if he is a literal history book.
ok guys the story is good, a bit dumb mc i guess, thinks he owes a debt of some kind to every girl character he meets( some childhood friend/ princess who unfriended on the spot when he was weak and then suddenly misses him when he is becoming strong and the dumb mc of course helps her in every ocassion, some rich merchant princess who has absolute no use to him but acts like her knight in every of her troubles, some wolf princess who follows him without being asked for few days and suddenly becomes long lost lovers after coming back, gets in trouble then expects to be rescued as if its his duty. His whole life would be spent being pawns of other people.Recommend me some stories without these dumb MCs, where the mc doesn't feel the need to rescue every damsel in distress like long lost lovers
trash,...............................................................................................................................................