only read 20 chap but it got the potential to be a great storyand those who says its harem genre and thats y its bad or says i dont like it so dont read this just stop acting tough and knowledge able like your are some kind of great artist or something. and at last i like the story so i read it if dont like it so i droped it but make laugh at writer , translator . or owner.
I thought this would be interesting, but this is another mindless face slapping novel. They sacrifice the story for these moments and the whole novel hurts becomes of it. many other novels do this and it really bothers me. dont do it if it will make your novel worse. Also chapters 1-10 the translation is pretty good, 11-20 it gets a bit wonky, then from 21-30 you can see the problems. I stopped st 31 because the story became mindless, the whole system was forgotten for some dumb drama, and the translation become worse throughout the story. hope this becomes better in the future.
Great read, a very good attempt from a novice author. The story plot is quite engrossing which you don't get much of trom the 'R-18' tag. Character development is greatly done too.There are a few mistakes here and there and forced scenes(but hey that's what most of us are reading it right?) and attempts to make things complex but overall a great read.
One of the classic novel of Louis Cha ( Jin Yong ) that created like the Legend of the Condor Heroes, Return of The Condor Heroes Trilogies.
This novel is trash.There are so many plot holes and the plot doesn't even make any sense.The mc is very arrogant and braindead and the other characters exist only to worship mc.There is no world background or character growth.I won't recommend it at all.I don't know how this kind of novel even got picked up.
Recommending this book. Sweet and heartbreaking when the MC's heart got broken by her first love.
Very interesting and captivating book...️...️
The story line is good. But I would really like to ask is it a Novel or a Series? Perhaps adding chapters you could stretch the length of chapters!
I love jax and q Quinn together!
nice story
good story but theres no ending yet...
phenomenal