AkosiRen2323
Based on the first 20 chapters, this appears to be a story that resonates with my taste. It reminds me of "Black Tech Internet Cafe System," which I thoroughly enjoyed. Reading the initial chapters had me laughing multiple times, and I have high expectations for the rest of the series. However, there seem to be issues with Chapter 27 and possibly earlier ones. It's unclear if it's due to translation, editing, or a lack thereof, but the content becomes problematic.
For instance, in the excerpt provided, the first sentence makes sense, but the subsequent lines lose coherence. The reference to "Sect Yipin" feels out of context, as there has been no prior mention of it. If there were, the connection would still be questionable. As a result, I am unable to maintain a five-star rating after reading Chapter 27, given the inconsistency and poor writing. I am deducting a star based on the decline in quality.
I really love this story but the more secrets, the more misunderstanding...i cant believe I'm considering of dropping this. My brain can't handle anxiety this much. Please update faster, maybe the problems are resolved quickly but if they aren't...man, i dont want to think I've wasted time.
Duuuuude. . You should've translated this comment XD dili tanan kasabot, sayang hahahha
I totally agree with you, I really enjoyed and loved reading it the suddenly the translations got bad which makes it difficult to read and understand. I think the reason for this is because the translator got replace.
Princess is Glamorous in Modern Days?
Not sure, I remember the ml have a military background and but not quite sure about the fl being dr*gged.
Very good choice gentleman.
Bro I have been waiting for months for a chapter LOL. Apparently tommorow we will get a chapter :3.
Thanks for updating ❤️
44th I guess
Just read the first chapter kinda like it hope he will creat mana teqchnics
The author was really like why should I stop being a villain with these updates
Thenx for the lols buddy, here's my contribution to the ascent of the Demon
Tbh, the romance w Chen Xi is so forced and cringy. Also, the 'i really dont care' attitude but still proceed on caring and narrating about whats happening to the players is so tiring that it keeps happening. Its okay, you can enjoy things and stop acting toughy like almight god all of sudden.
