This novel is good for the readers who loves to read the novel which has overpowered mc with a functioning brain. It also seems like author done a great research about mauryan dynasty and Hindu mythology. All in end this novel great.
A unique concept like reincarnation but done in a different way, most reincarnation novels only reincarnate the soul but this novel practically scarp that and gave the stale concept a refreshing touch. The system interaction with the MC is kind of like in the novel monster hunter where the system isn't dull or boring. A great concept and a great novel if executed correctly.
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I like the different perspective. From the Killers eyes.Great ? great read. ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Another sex (dual cultivaton) novel with a somewhat OP evil mc who get lucky and got the best sart combo, master, veins, skills, etc, etc...
So far it is good, but a warning for those that want to read this. This is a slight AU Naruto, as we can see in that he has no problem killing or hurting someone, altough that could've been the juubi's fault.
This is a unique spin on the concept of Elementalist itself. I like it very much. Also, the Author provided with several Auxiliary Chapters to supplement the readers curiosity about the Characters. Modern Science, Historical Figures, and Elements from Indian, Greek and Roman Mythology all come together to paint a decent and beautiful picture. I highly recommend it!
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I must say it is surprisingly good. I know it is might be slow. Here are a few point I want to share: - This is world of magic. I suppose the "Video Game Tag" might be MC think he is transfer into game world full of magic- The world reveal its self as the story progress. It is a bit slow but I didn't mind it.- An insect can be intelligence well that's possible since it is world of magic.- He is in the bottom of the food chain but still he do his best to survive.- All living thing in this novel has special skill and can involve into higher creature.- As I read 60 chapters there are races: dragon, goblin, druid, human, spirit etc.
It was good to see that Yeman was able to adapt to the system right away, but I guess it felt like he accepted the matter too easily? Also, Yeman's character is not established, like he has no prominent traits except for his occasional raging. Also, his history with Marie was quite abruptly narrated. This history has a bearing in the story, so I was hoping that it could be described a tad more confusing. I guess the first three chapters will be confusing if the reader doesn't know that the MC was transmigrated. I appreciate the detailed action scenes which compensates for the short chapters. I love Mina, by the way. She's feisty and such a badass! The pacing of the story is just right, but I think that the MC's improvements as a player was too slow in the beginning. Then suddenly, his growth became exponential. It's kind of following the usual progression of a transmigration light novel. :( He doesn't use his resources wisely and keeps on being saved by his teammates. [I'm really sorry for saying these mean things. I just want you to improve as an author, along with me too! ]There are a myriad of grammatical mistakes. (Sorry if I'm going technical) However, note that grammatical mistakes are easy to correct. We all make this mistake, so don't worry about it. Incorrect verb tenses, misuse/absence of punctuation marks are the majority of these. I'll be cheering you on! You clearly have a good world background. I hope that these criticisms will motivate you to do better. Remember that nobody is perfect, as all things should be. We should always find a way to improve! Please continue writing this art of yours!
I like the premise. Very anime-feels. The Mc staring some gallant warriors in the parrade while dreaming of becoming one someday. Really, it is one of the best opening for me in all anime I’d watched.The following chapters is unexpectedly interesting. Immersive and enjoyable.I recommend this book to readers who love system and anime feels.