It is one of the best novels that I have led so far, the development of the story, the world, the character, is going very well, I just hope it continues like this and there is no object that makes it more OP than everyone else. I read just 30 caps
I've checked the novel out. it's so bad mate. can someone please delete this already? the author must be braindead or something. i thought it was so good when I saw the other reviews and the win-win ranking but it's a joke
They changed character names from the original so I gave a lower translation quality. The stability of updates I placed as 1 star since 99% of these trial read novels get dropped at chapter 40. Story development I rated as 3 stars, again because they changed some stuff and because some of the plot is cliche and forced. Character design was 3 stars because they could have given more information. World background is the same, the give very little information about the world other than it is being invaded.
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This is definitely the best work I have ever written your support, I truly believe that with enough I can make it great, Seriously bleive when i say this will never be dropped until we all die...
don't hold me to that i have a.d.d
I actually quite liked the novel, until I read the others' reviews and found out this is a copy of the first order.
There's no reason to read this as it'd be simply better to read the original. Hope this helped so that you don't waste your time
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I really do like the worldbuilding and setting that works behind this novel, it is really interesting to see an enemies to lovers. Plus now there's a sci fi twist to it? Take my money. The chapters were a bit short ish for me, but I think that's normal? I haven't read anything on WN for a while now.
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I enjoyed the story, it's a bit of a cliche however it's one that I really enjoy and that's all that really matters to me. *****************
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There is a confusion in tenses. Characters are detached and it makes it difficult to feel empathy for them. The flow of the story is forced.
I would suggest building more on character development and the settings. Info dumps are also a huge issue.