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kinda interesting idea for a story but the mc is just to much of gotta hide stuff and be a wimp, I read the chapters until now but I'm dropping this it's just too stupid with no development going on just always I'm great but I have to put up with my wife's family to make her happy when she's just a stuck up brat in the end
[Reviewed on: 15-06-2021] *Glimpse of initial chapters.*GOOD POINTS:- Likeable MC- Not extremely poverty stricken, MC has some saving and stuff to support himself- Weak to strong trope is executed well- MC can think, he observes and doesn't go round being bullied physically (verbally, yes)- You don't have to cringe because MC is dumb, because he isn't- Expect beasts, Qi cultivation, maybe realms too, and lots of action- Some realistic elements are also depicted because we spot corruption, injustice, torture, bullying, conspiracies tooWEAKNESS:- The narration style is highly 'telling' rather than 'showing'- Author's omnipresent tone is everywhere, which gave lesser screen and insights to the character- Readable novel, though there are tense fluctuations- Some information is repeated, such as chapter 2 and 3 has repeated info about Meng Yan.
I have been following author Avan for awhile and i really like his story. character depth, logical story and worlbuilding is his best forte. very much recommended
it's my first time reading a web novel. I think this one was a good one I am glad this one is my first web novel. thank you author. please continue updating more and more! !!
This is really well written, and it looks like most of it is Original. Author is really showing his ambition and talent here.
And it shows with the quality of the writing.
This is a hidden gem, This novel is new but it's very interesting, After reading the first chapter you will be hooked up to this Novel...
one more thing the writing is very decent and you will not find any grammar mistakes.
The plot and Character design are pretty unique, the author did a pretty good job.
[img=recommend] All the best authors for your amazing work keep it up...
There is always an issue with giving your character way too many powers especially if it's someone OP like Saitama, also, why the heck would you stick to the plot and why the double heck is there another reincarnated person in your story? that's a taboo when it comes to reincarnation novels, if never bodes well for the story.
This is a great novel which I can see myself getting hooked on! I've honestly gotten tired of seeing so many books of the Werewolf genre being filled with unnecessary and badly-executed romance. The first line does well in reeling the readers into the protagonist's situation. On that note, I feel that the paragraphs from the second chapter onwards could be cut shorter and that with typos being adjusted, this book would do well. All the best with this and good work, author! [img=recommend]
Translation - kinda bad but readable
Update - trial so nope
Story development - is ok as less number of chapters so not sure but it was not as bad as the other trial novels have
Character design - just okish
World background-
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Underwhelming novel that fails to deliver on what was an initially interesting premise. The plot progression isn't interesting and deviates from the initial premise to turn into the typical novel with a mc being controlled by some higher power to put on a show for them. Giving such a low rating because it wasted such an interesting premise, which really disappointed me.