Poet_Legion
This is a piece of trash.1. The MC reincarnates after losing a fight after being betrayed by his "friend
Seriously, when will will the new chapters be posted? The novel is master piece. Good grammar, slow paced, good humor, good character in depth background and the environment. The only issue is updates
GO see Thriller Paradise intermediately! TO my surprise, when my friends recommend this bookMY first idea is like i don't like thrillerDESCRIPTION part, though, tells me it's not about thrillerSEE the content of the book i decided to read itTHE story in the book really grabbed meNEW characters are indeed attractiveSITE Qi really did something well on translating this bookPlease read this comment carefully and dont tell everyone else you found a good book.
That moment when you discover a video game novel is not complete trash, or an isekai, or even hentai novel is actualy good. That moment when our mind is blown by how it breaks apart your common sense built over the years. A genre which is always cliche, repetitive, similar, and obvious defaults, has a novel that is actually not below 3.5 stars...
spoiler mc is sometime flexing too much and sometimes too kind and generous for eg 6soul bones without his help they would never even have found out what it is he even let them observe his soul pet many secrets than he still has to give a technique flexing would be the first time military saved him and died and severely injured acts generous refusing some resources of student level to give professional soul masters oh yes it's more valuable than their lives doesn't even bother learning their name and at first it seemed like overwhelming knowledge to train soul pets bit they all just have awaken different already available bloodline and while it is about soul pets we doesn't see mc really train much except for when he first cultivated he doesn't even bother culivate sword after a few time by the way technique should be cultvated by two beings I think so how pet did it is beyond me and it just seems like he get resources easily all the while and people treat him nicely extraordinary luck when he refused they still insist on giving him things +
Shin is in a word a absolute OP mc and should meet Arthur in game to rival him and maybe take him down a notch. Oh and monkey ill review ur chaps and write wat u should fix if u want me to if ur still looking for one. Overall really good story and keep it up dude.
PLEASE LEARN REAL ENGLISH, its like I am reading a story translates by a 5 year old. You suck at translating. Either take some fucking grammar classes, OR never translate again.
Translation Quality 4/5 ✖3Stability of Updates 5/5 ✖2Story Development 1/5 ✖10Character Design 1/5 ✖10World Background 1/5 ✖10The total score 0.29714285 =1/5
Finally.... What I want is not an anti hero but an cold blooded psychopath who is epitome of evil. Hope this novel is same and MC needs to be OP..... Hope translation picks up fast
good story speed is good not too slow not too fast either, development going well mc didn't just start having 6 women each scenario is well thought.The story is developing and i hope the author continue
this novel has no point to its existence. the beginning plot is rushed, and just outta nowhere he now has the search bar, next after the rape incident, vegetative state girlfriend and his grief and still present love for her the guy decides to take a drunk women home and have a wild night. its like he doesn't remember the rape crime he was set up for in a very similar scenario. the funny part is that its only ch.12 and tbe author already destroyed his own novels synopsis. really disappointing mc. i have no respect for the man anymore.
This novel has had nearly enough votes to get published for about 3 weeks now but it keeps getting surpassed by all the stuff around it and I hope we can continue keeping this one on the voting page and not published because that's pretty funny to me.
