Elvling08
Hey Vsauce, Micheal here. Our MC's journey is a coincidence. Or is it?
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Bah! What sort of trashy forced plot is this. For the next few days I’m going to do a mandatory 1 star review to spite webnovel for picking this trash!
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5 stars because I like the premise of the book. Can anyone give me the raws or any book that has a similar storyline? Doesn’t matter where the book is located.
This is a goldmine for someone who is looking for a yandere romance, where the female lead is a beautiful yandere. Also, this is the type of yandere who would never wish or allow any harm upon MC. So, it is a safe zone to walk upon.All in all, this story satisfies all your fantasies about a yandere female character. And the story and pacing is quite good too.
I liked the beginning of this story, but when he teleports to valheim it drops down for me. Why dont he takes care of his believers, but goes down some stupid sidestory that goes on and on, where you may think that the sidystory delevops to the mainstory and his believers to some random talks that pops up sometimes?
It was a little rushed in the beginning, but the books settles down to a nice flow around chapter 6 or 7. The world building could be improved, but after the first 20 pages it’s a good novel.
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To be honest, I have never read something like that past, but I am happy I came across the book. I really liked the idea behind the story. Nicely written. I am rooting for you❣️
Keep writing
Great book thus far, author takes care to go back and edit if needed instead of just authors notes later. Great choice in music references and easy to get into and flow is smooth. Overall a very good read. Looking forward to the rest of the book.
