Well, i can see that you are a newbie, but i hope that you can improve. The story looks a little cliche but i expect you to bring some uniqueness.. The character looks a little from what i expected after reading the synopsis but it is a good thing. I hope that instead of focusing on harem you will focus on developing a story
I liked the novel first chapter had a good hook. Keep writing and improving good luck...................................................................
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Great book, good grammar, nice plot, good world background. Amazing Characters and good updating stability.......Highly recommendable.......
This is a story that is not one. The author is only rewriting Douluo Dalu and adding a few sentences like: "MC looks on with a smile on his face". The biggest tale that there is a problem with this is that you could replace the MC with an object and you would have the same things happening. The problem is that the author wants his character to be with Tang San and co and doesn't want to change the story but doesn't make it so that his character has a story.As an example, during the Shrek academy arc, the teachers teach nothing to the MC because he is OP and doesn't need help with cultivation, but they could have set up a regiment to make him gain true experience by sending him on some adventures. What I meant by all of that is that the author doesn't make a story parallel to canon so that his character can live in the douluo world, he is only witnessing and doing nothing.That's the negative of this story, and since I don't like being negative about things I will talk about the positives.In terms of story updates, the author is constant and the quality doesn't fall.The writing is good and it is easily readable and aside from the common mistakes, like quiet (volume down) that becomes quite (quantity), you will not find anything to complain about reading this.
I really like this story, it's definitely worth reading if you've read something like... What's a good example? Like a secret society type of thing, but with super powers? I like it, and the development and progress of the MC is pretty good. The main thing the author could brush up on is grammar and wordplay. Other than that, great job!
I absolutely love this novel, like wow! I've been reading this since 2019-2020, and I just love it!!! I adore this book so much. Like the author, you did such a good job with writing and the characters and the plot, and everything. Geez, how did you even come up with this. The terrible thing is that I've been waiting for like a year just for the next chapter??? I mean, are you not going to continue it, cause if you don't, I'll be really sad and devastated??? Anywayz this is like my favorite novel ever! Good job author and thank you for this???
this book has a super good story line with a new and refreshing format that is different from some repetitive formulated stories. It has a completely different cultivation style with blood boiling competition. this story is pretty fast paced with only a small amount of irritating cliffhangers. I simply love this adventure, academy, survival, cultivation style story that is done in an exciting and wonderful way.
godly novel ?? mixed two of my favourite genra vampires and mmorpg love it. I want more authour can you upload more I'm in love with it ??
guys is there romance? i am at c.620 or something and am quite interested on this. also i am not really sure if i like this or hate this. the author made mc to be very smart but i can't stop getting this feeling sometimes that Jason is actually quite stupid. is it only me or do others have this feeling too?
the story is good, I like the characters, just with there were a few more povs from Christian and even the side characters like Frankie. there are a few typos and very few grammatical errors,so it is definitely one of the better online novels out there. the author really tries and is very talented.
The touch of mystery that has to do with is what glued me to my screen. Gina was such a betrayer. Strongly rooting for Reina, and i know her comeback after rebirth will be the with style. You nailed it, great author.