this author cant differenciate between fiction and real history. his telling stories but then he will give backstory with real history. trying to explain but will confuse the reader even more
The story isn't bad. The writing feels like it was written by a three years old. At least, it was better written than Donald Trump.
Será que ele vai ficar com todos?
a perfect story telling ,the story building is so attractive
Really author ace I read it before now and I see it is interesting but have few readable grammatical error ...if you don't believe me just get a proofreader and see what am saying thnks
Honestly, writing is ok. A few grammatical errors but nothing that stops you from reading fluently. The main problem is that his system doesn’t really do system things, the system is not really explored or talked about, the only thing we know is that it fixes his posture when working out or shooting, I wish the system would get an upgrade or something, he has his system and has played five seasons but still loses to the well know centers just for plot, his effort does not match his win rate, five seasons and bro still feels mediocre. I get the whole mature thing with top lives but bro is too zen, talk about his daily life with actual detail, basketball players and fans talk a lot online add a story on that too, show interactions with other players instead of a line just saying "they talked” actually show the talking and write about some actual behind the scenes. Also bro has two kids and a wife, it’s like they don’t do stuff together, they feel like character fillers. I have not seen any more improvements from mc, especially coming from a guy with 2 lives and even has a system, most importantly he has played 5+ seasons and not much to talk about … especially for a guy with a system.
thanks for the great Novel author upon reading up to the latest chapter got me intrigue your story got an interesting background and potential to grow more I hope you kept on updating your story willingly I'm going to spend power stones and coins for this
I'm liking it at first but then the MC as of chap 41 to 52 I don't really remember when but anyway stops or always forgetting to just use his mind control ability and its frustrating, thats all and thanks
what can I say ¯u2060u2060_u2060(u2060ツu2060)u2060_u2060/ the author paid me for the review(joking), it's a good novel give it a try !
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I am fine with this Content. It deserves a 5 stars in my opinion. I am from a country where these novels are not available if they were available I'd definitely buy the copies.
I liked this story until the moment when the mc became a pathetic simp...................................................................................