This story is hilarious, Though i do have to complain that the mc lets the system do everything and gets praised for it but excluding that i had a great time reading it
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did not really find it that good Idk why everyone says it good?I am at chapter 32 and I still find the mc kinda stupid and he should have the advantage of an extra life and act more smarter
I am now beyond chapter 350 and it is high time to give this story a review.Fair warning - this review is LONG!Let's start with the obvious. The author writes in his own unique style. The writing directly depicts the thoughts of the mc. These often drift from one topic to another and depict the mc's quirkiness in all its glory. I enjoy how the mood of the mc is depicted in the sentence structure itself. For example when he is dejected and down, sentences get very rigid and short while when he is curious and feels welcome it becomes a lot more descriptive. Regarding typos and grammar, the novel has some mistakes every now and then but not to the extent of being bothersome.The beginning of TUG is a rough one. The story got me confused at first and seemed very aimless which in turn didn't keep me very invested into it. Only when the mc declares the existence of the unnamed god, does the story start to pick up. It takes until approximately chapter 100 until the style of writing gets more solid in both expression and humor. The funny thing is that after getting beyond the rough start I became more and more addicted to the strangeness and found myself binging the entire thing in very little time.Reasons for why I binged so much are that the story develops a particular flow. With events happening from the mc's perspective, which only get you guessing at what catastrophic events he will set in motion and trying to read between the lines for what is truly happening beyond the comprehension of the mc. Then the same events and/or their aftermath are told from a different point of view. This change shows the ridiculous nature of what actually happened.The novel lives from the imperceptive nature and lack of common sense from the mc which leads to innumerable misunderstandings. These point of view (POV) chapters are the cherry on top of the cake of absurd misunderstandings.As the story continues characters also become a lot more relatable to the extent of truly moving me emotionally. The overly optimistic and naive outlook of the mc is not only basis for misunderstandings but also motivating and heartwarming. He is a guy who wants to peacefully live and enjoy his life which he struggles to maintain.(In the beginning there isn't that much depth to the characters as later on, making especially Luna a character that is hard to understand and like in my opinion).Now for the overarching story and worldbuilding. The overarching story is there although it develops very slowly. The focus is more on the here and now while the gears turn in the background. One gets the feeling that - as is with the smaller story arcs - even the bigger story is slowly building tension and will very likely completely blow in the distant future.The world itself is solidly built. It has a fixed framework and everything moves within while slowly exploring said framework (except the mc who is very oblivious to it and tramples all over established standards).Yes this review is way too long. But I think reading more than 350 chapters warrants a proper evaluation so here you go.Lastly thanks Zombie for writing and investing so much in bringing TUG into existence every single day.
After watching the drama, i hunted book’s translation. The quality of the translation is awesome and the book doesn’t disappoint. Thank you!
This novel is completely made up of templates and clichés. Absolutely nothing original. The protagonist is identical to thousands of similar Chinese heroes. The characters are disposable too. And of course, random encounters that benefit the main character. There are no normal negative characters here. They are all brainless and follow a pattern. The personalities of the characters are completely undefined. The story is at the elementary level. Very dry and soulless. I do not advise anyone.
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Writing quality - Superb! The author's writing style seems very experienced and reminds me of the sort seen in translated series.The plot so far seems really promising, I can already see the foreshadowing for an epic storyline. So kudos to the author for achieving that.The characters are extremely engaging and intersting to follow, the mc is quite likable so far.World background ... once again the author has done a good job in describing it too us without making it feel like an info dump.Really great job!
This review contains some spoilers for first few chapters.Writing quality - Compared to the standard of Wn, the writing is top notch. It's descriptive and detailed.Story development - Not much to say as only read first 5 chaps.Character Design - The mc is interesting to say the least, but also feels like a typical one. When his village was raided, people and his own mother met brutal end but at that time he only thought of himself. This tells a lot about his character. Just what is his experiences in the past life for him to become like this? Or was he born like that? Only by reading further will we able to know.Updating Stability - I have personally talked with the author and I know that the stockpile is huge. So updates will be pretty stable.World Background - Again not much to say but that the world will be harsh and brutal.Overall, SpaceMage is highly recommended.
The letter that started this narrative glazed my face with a smile. It's good to have some play around words and make a work or story another home for the readers. This will turn out well of course.